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Published: 2001-03-20 13:30:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 341; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 74
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Description Remembrance

[© Sean Maisch - 2001 - 2020 ]
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I have visited this place before,
but before now,
there was much much more.

With you away,
this place is different,
it all seems so gray.

I wish I could take it all back,
and do it over again,
but now I'm on a different track.

So I sit here all alone,
remembering how it was,
letting out a sorrowful moan.

I'm heading downward without you,
remembering what we had,
remembering all we went through.

But this time my tears are cold,
life is dragging me down,
and there is nothing for me to grab ahold.
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Comments: 6

nurikoluver [2001-03-22 04:54:53 +0000 UTC]

/me huggles you, "Me sowwies about your girl...The same thing sorta happened with my ex-boyfriend and we sorta seperated after that, even though I Genuinely loved him. I feel ya."

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motion [2001-03-22 03:28:44 +0000 UTC]

sean, is this about your old g/f? That's strong poem, and I feel you bro.

.:Superstar Dj MoTioN:::::.. ^_^

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rabbitzx2001 [2001-03-20 22:36:39 +0000 UTC]

er... wait... this isn't about a family member... and nobody died... so i guess i CAN understand it. love sucks, man. however, it can be great. everything works out in the end... always.

[l33t] rx2kONE 0wn5 j00 [/l33t]

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rabbitzx2001 [2001-03-20 22:34:59 +0000 UTC]

Really great poem, man... I've never lost a close family member... I mean, all my relatives live in South Africa, so it didn't really mean anything to me when my grandmother died... Or my grandfather... But I can only imagine how you must feel.

[l33t] rx2kONE 0wn5 j00 [/l33t]

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itirep [2001-03-20 14:57:28 +0000 UTC]

sad,sorrowful words.long ing for things that are lost to us,is unfortunately a great part of the human tragedy.but so is the growth that we can experience as a result of those losses.i'd love to see a part 2 of this-of how you are able to overcome that sorrow.nice poem.

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jark [2001-03-20 13:43:08 +0000 UTC]

these words are lovely. love makes folks blind to reality and therefore, in many instances, people say things that they do not mean. its unfortunate, but it does happen.

--[ jark ]--

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