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Amanda standsbehind a sheet of glass
empty canvass of her face
smiling innocence
enticing memory to fall
into disarray
(Memory)
Amanda awoke to golden suns
painting her face
covering her fragility
in sheets of white smiles
she was beauty unmistakable
when silence blossomed
a field of roses over her pains
(I remember)
Listening to the night skies
choke to the sounds of screams
falling from the bed she lay
as the cloud she fell from
sacrificed his calm to drink
and fell his rage upon her
and passions in her...
(Under Covers)
With darkness came solace
crystal crashing from her eyes
unto soil; and there I grew
an essence rooted in her soul
and she would hide,
under my mass of leaves
seeking subterfuge
from the masquerade of the sun
(Loss)
As night once again broke to day
I awoke to find
my tortured angel
sprouted a new pair of wings
and flew away
bursting across the sunset
and raining down her misery
across the asphalt...
...And I smiled....
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Comments: 3
i'm lovin the strong feelings i get from reading this
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Strong. I like the structure of the poem, also some of the phrasing ... (example, the "innocence enticing memory to fall") ... and the perspective is interesting ...
A good work.
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Very interesting. I like how you made it from the point of view of a tree, or at least that's the way I percieved it as. Nice work.
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