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Published: 2002-06-23 11:06:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 45; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 12
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Description last night
baby got a new set of wings
and painted herself against the night sky

flew the tops of every mountain
too high for any ocean to capture
and combusted
into thosands of colors
as the sun broke mono-black

left here with old pictures
a handful of memories
and a headful of tears
baby's high-flying in rainbows
While I wait in shadows
for sun to melt glue
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Comments: 2

WarthogDemon [2010-05-22 01:08:09 +0000 UTC]

Nice.

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tmpst24myst [2002-08-17 22:02:13 +0000 UTC]

this is almost lyrical...Sounds lile it could be a country song, a good one though. May i suggest you add more to this? I think this would make the poem a little bit more full as it seems to be rushed. I mean, the ideas seem to jump instead of graduate, do you know what i mean?

anyway, i wouldn't mind seeing this longer, if you do chose to do so, let me know so I can read it, please?

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