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diluted-e — On Memory
Published: 2002-06-07 19:52:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 58; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Memorywhispering against my ear
you watch me
with a symphony of eyes
this skin, your chamber
throne, encased in a castle
Of sticks
Memory
twisted angel
remembrance of past mistakes
you protect me
so enchanting are your words
that this kingdom so easily succumbs
to your warnings
of oncoming threat
Memory
thorn in my spine
paralyzing progression
with recounts of wrongs
leave me
and let that devil
harden these walls
and sweeten your words
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I like the bittersweet feelings you portray here... I especially like the middle verse.. it begins the transition between the positive and the negative... Yet another wonderful poem.
Nyk
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Powerful...love this line "encased in a castle of sticks"....I'm really likeing the development of your new style of writing...the last couple of lines really hit me as well:
"leave me
and let that devil
harden these walls
and sweeten your words"
Definitly one of my favorites from this deviant's writing..it leaves me thinking about it for the rest of the day.
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I like the imagery in this a lot... "symphony of eyes"... "thorn in my spine"...
Nice work .
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