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Published: 2002-04-27 21:30:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 70; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Turned leftas did you
picture frame in my mind
broken glass in hand
blood, a sweet gravy in my palms
love your sweet decite
Right another way to go
as did you
forgotten memories returned to play
and no glue to mend the old
blood, tainting your mona lisa
with sweet kisses we fall into mirrors
a reflection and nothing more
no memories
no hurt
just an image, and two smiling faces
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Comments: 1
bittersweet irony... the left/right "as did you" repetition is very interesting, and the ending is beautiful. The only concern I have is that you use the word "sweet" three times, which seems like a little too much for a short poem.
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monkease
gin and ninjas
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