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Published: 2011-01-29 02:31:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 2232; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 300
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Smoof & Poof Comic 2~~~
I introduce Poof. This is the second comic I am submitting to the Texas Newspaper company. I have another made, so that makes me having only one more to draw up.
Poof is just your typical lazy mutt who lives with his master's house cat, Smoof. Poof never speaks in the whole comic series, since appearently only Cats are intelegent enough to speak.
Anywho, This is comic #2, comic #3 will come tomarrow
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Smoof&Poof (c) Cortney Bourlon
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Haha so cute 
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...Could I give you some constructive criticism?
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sure, I did ask for a critic
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Alright then. The enjoyment of this comic seems to be in it's subtile air of cuteness. However, this subtileness is, well, kinda ruined in the last panel. I really don't think you need Smoof to say anything in the last panel. Just the picture of a distressed cat is more than enough of a punchline.
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when you think about it, you're right. I'll get some tweeks on that comic later, thanks for the comment
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