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Dovesplash — What are you waiting for?

Published: 2011-06-12 00:14:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 2877; Favourites: 94; Downloads: 11
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Description CRITUQE PLEASE!!!!I rely want to improve!!!!(so if you could help me with that dreadfull cave )
COMMENT PLEASE!!!!! If you fave and run, it means nothing, I want to know Why you faved it!


4 hours+ 11 layers= this
I think I can improve on things here, such as the tunnel/cave( I stink at backgrounds) and lighting and stuff, but overall, I like this, also it’s a fake screenshot, lets pretend I made an epic AMV XD
Notice the cat silhouette back there ^^
The cats are (from left to right) Blossomfall, Ivypool, and what I assume to be (spoiler warning) Hollyleaf (spoilers end)
I couldn’t find any info on blossomfall’s eye color so I just made them that yellowish color that’s popular in cats.

Explanation below may contain spoilers!!!!
(if you haven’t read sign of the moon don’t read anything below!)


So this is the scene from sign of the moon, starting on page 249

With Blossomfall struggling along behind her, Ivypool stepped out of the mouth of the tunnel and halted, letting out a yowl of disappointment. they where back in the cave with the under ground rive.
“I don’t believe this!” Blossomfall hissed, flopping down on the ground. ”We’ll never get out.”
“I wish I’d asked that cat his name,”((fallen leaves))Ivypool meowed. “we could call for him.” Twitching her whiskers angrily, she added, “I don’t suppose he would of come anyway.”
Blossomfall lay on her side, panting. “Im sorry,” she whispered “this is all my fault. I was the one who wanted to come down here.”
“I could of stopped you” Ivypool argued.
“How?” incredibly their was a gleam of humor in Blossomfall’s eyes. “by hanging onto my tail?”
Ivypool let out a snort on amusement. She couldn’t help picturing herself with her teeth sunk into Blossomfall’s tail while the tortoiseshell warrior dangled over the hole.
“Come on! what are you waiting for?”
The voice came from behind them; Ivypool stiffened ,her pelt bristling and her paws tingling with fear. (screenshot taken) A heartbeat later she forced herself to turn around, but she couldn’t see anything , unless perhaps there was a gleam of eyes in the darkest recesses of the cave. She was sure though it wasent the ginger tom they had met before.
“you want to get out don’t you?” the voice went on impatiently. “you know you shouldn’t be here.”
“oh yes-please help us!” Blossomfall begged.
“very well. Fallow me.”

From the first time I read this, I wanted to draw it, im pretty sure that cat ^ is Holly, Or at least I hope so.
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Comments: 69

Amerikat In reply to ??? [2011-06-12 00:42:45 +0000 UTC]

it was on a different website... it's from April, so it isn't that great... [link]

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Dovesplash In reply to Amerikat [2011-06-12 00:48:15 +0000 UTC]

Its not that bad!
holly looks quite good!

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Amerikat In reply to Dovesplash [2011-06-12 00:49:09 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks, but I'm probably gonna re-do it, I'm not proud of it. xD I get embarrassed with my work after about a month!

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Planeta-Starlight In reply to ??? [2011-06-12 00:26:40 +0000 UTC]

A very beautiful piece of art! It shows a nice shade and light effects! The poses and emotions show the story effects and the shadow show mystery and effect! I enjoy everything of this picture, even if you hardly do things digital, it's still beautiful!

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Dovesplash In reply to Planeta-Starlight [2011-06-12 00:41:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

I love you in-depth comments

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LivieLu100 In reply to ??? [2011-06-12 00:21:22 +0000 UTC]

the beams of light make it difficult to see the cat shadow in the back ground.

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Dovesplash In reply to LivieLu100 [2011-06-12 00:41:42 +0000 UTC]

in the book, the cats couldent make her out, so i was trying to keep her kinda hidden

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LivieLu100 In reply to Dovesplash [2011-06-12 00:46:15 +0000 UTC]

oh I havent read that far lol

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Dovesplash In reply to LivieLu100 [2011-06-12 00:50:36 +0000 UTC]

oops ^^

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LivieLu100 In reply to Dovesplash [2011-06-12 00:50:54 +0000 UTC]

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TomGirl121 In reply to ??? [2011-06-12 00:20:09 +0000 UTC]

Just remember that lighting is closest to the place that is the light source, and the shading is the opposite.
And all I can tell you for the background is... maybe blur it more, or shade it where theres a bump in the rock edge or something

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Dovesplash In reply to TomGirl121 [2011-06-12 00:42:20 +0000 UTC]

Ok ^^ thnaks
in not to gaad at digital so im going to try hard to improve ^^

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TomGirl121 In reply to Dovesplash [2011-06-12 01:15:32 +0000 UTC]

okay
just never give up >C
I know it sounds corny, but my art used to look like this: [link]

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Dovesplash In reply to TomGirl121 [2011-06-12 18:59:23 +0000 UTC]

wow 0_o

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TomGirl121 In reply to Dovesplash [2011-06-12 19:23:35 +0000 UTC]

i know o-o

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02wildmixy07 [2011-06-12 00:18:24 +0000 UTC]

wow epic <3

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Dovesplash In reply to 02wildmixy07 [2011-06-12 00:43:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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02wildmixy07 In reply to Dovesplash [2011-06-12 01:30:17 +0000 UTC]

np ^^

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