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Published: 2012-07-09 04:28:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 3563; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 137
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Description Random Idea bouncing around my head, couldn't bring myself to finish the bully. (Magic Taser called the "man-eater" probably belonged to the bully's mom)

Will move it to scraps in a day or so.

mostly just getting my self back in the saddle
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audible88 In reply to ??? [2012-07-09 05:19:02 +0000 UTC]

But does it remove the competition so much as, for the skilled paramour, handicap it?

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DPRagan In reply to audible88 [2012-07-09 06:33:03 +0000 UTC]

True, but the kid wasn't a paramour, just sat next to Sakura. While there was no shortage of wannabe Boyfriends for the girl, the Bully was the worst of the lot.

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Jimbobob5536 In reply to ??? [2012-07-09 04:55:27 +0000 UTC]

The expressions are awesome.

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DPRagan In reply to Jimbobob5536 [2012-07-09 05:01:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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DolphinSilverwolf In reply to ??? [2012-07-09 04:50:26 +0000 UTC]

It'd be an interesting way to conduct health class...Gender swap the entire class for a month.

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DPRagan In reply to DolphinSilverwolf [2012-07-09 05:00:25 +0000 UTC]

Teacher would be fired likely something like that would be dangerous.

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DolphinSilverwolf In reply to DPRagan [2012-07-10 01:26:17 +0000 UTC]

It would have to depend on the results of PTA meetings, the expertise of the teacher, and the advance planning.

I'd be more worried about militant feminist groups waiting for him to do the F2M's first and then shooting him before he can do the M2F's...or reverse any of the changes.

I had a similar thought..."Surely Hogwarts would have a health class, these are adolescent mages, but also adolescent humans..." Then I also thought..."wait...we have Professor McGonagall who is highly disciplined, very professional, and a specialist in TRANSFIGURATION..." But I quashed that, because what could arise from a deep story would simply be rule 34'ed to death.

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DPRagan In reply to DolphinSilverwolf [2012-07-10 03:35:10 +0000 UTC]

Well I would imagine that Transformations put a lot of stress on a human body.

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DolphinSilverwolf In reply to DPRagan [2012-07-10 16:00:56 +0000 UTC]

Depends on the transformational process.

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DPRagan In reply to DolphinSilverwolf [2012-07-11 01:48:21 +0000 UTC]

Seems like that is how it is in my universes

unless really REALLY slow

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Nubbybub In reply to ??? [2012-07-09 04:36:33 +0000 UTC]

you think the teachers would notice the male student that is now female

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DPRagan In reply to Nubbybub [2012-07-09 04:39:16 +0000 UTC]

Yup, Bullyboy didn't think things through he got cocky.

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Nubbybub In reply to DPRagan [2012-07-09 04:41:11 +0000 UTC]

well i suppose its not weather they notice but if they find out who did it that matters to the bully

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DPRagan In reply to Nubbybub [2012-07-09 04:46:55 +0000 UTC]

If I ran a magic school I would have several hidden cameras shielded against malicious magic and hacking.

That and several obvious ones as to fool the students.

Was thinking of having the bully end up in trouble with the law on this one.

Like I said, not a well thought out story so I was clearing it out of my head.

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Nubbybub In reply to DPRagan [2012-07-09 04:55:08 +0000 UTC]

i think its well thought out if you ask me he should get the same thing he gave his victim

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DPRagan In reply to Nubbybub [2012-07-09 05:01:06 +0000 UTC]

Eye fore and eye and TG for a TG

I would say, depends upon the judge.

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Nubbybub In reply to DPRagan [2012-07-09 05:03:18 +0000 UTC]

well you know what judge iccolo thinks if nothing else

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DPRagan In reply to Nubbybub [2012-07-09 05:11:22 +0000 UTC]

hehee

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Nubbybub In reply to DPRagan [2012-07-09 05:15:26 +0000 UTC]

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YRPOtaku169 In reply to ??? [2012-07-09 04:28:59 +0000 UTC]

...I don't get it...

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DPRagan In reply to YRPOtaku169 [2012-07-09 04:35:08 +0000 UTC]

Probably why it will end up in scarps soon.

It was mostly to warm up and clean out my head of oddball stuff.

But if you want a Premise: Magic School (That also teach normal students that have been infected by magic) Top Mage girl Sakura sits next to an unnamed boy (the one on the left) while the school Bully who has a thing for Sakura gets pissed at the boy.

The bully does something about it.

Like I said, it was something to clear out of my head.

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darth603 In reply to DPRagan [2012-07-09 12:03:36 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like something I'd write... I like it.

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DPRagan In reply to darth603 [2012-07-09 12:43:00 +0000 UTC]

Do you have the bully get arrested?

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darth603 In reply to DPRagan [2012-07-09 12:49:19 +0000 UTC]

No, it usually comes back in a much nastier way.

I think the last time, the bullies decided they weren't going to allow the old guy whose halloween decorations they were trashing to call the cops, so they broke into his house. Turned out he wasn't just going to the phone; he'd grabbed a shotgun along the way.

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DPRagan In reply to darth603 [2012-07-09 13:32:06 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, thought it might be interesting if the Bully was connected to a Influential family.

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darth603 In reply to DPRagan [2012-07-09 13:51:59 +0000 UTC]

His dad was the chief of police or something like that, and the cops had a standing order to not mess with him or his friends when they were out committing criminal mischief.

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DPRagan In reply to darth603 [2012-07-09 13:57:03 +0000 UTC]

Was thinking more Japan and the Samurai and Nobel families that still wield a lot of power.

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darth603 In reply to DPRagan [2012-07-09 14:00:59 +0000 UTC]

Hadn't thought about doing it with *that* much influence. Could be interesting, though. There's a general rule that bullies have bullies for parents.

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DPRagan In reply to darth603 [2012-07-09 14:03:33 +0000 UTC]

True he might bring shame on the family name or since magic is involved it might be a well known temple.

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darth603 In reply to DPRagan [2012-07-09 14:10:38 +0000 UTC]

Or daddy might decide to accuse the victim of having brought it on himself.

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DPRagan In reply to darth603 [2012-07-09 23:00:34 +0000 UTC]

distinct possibility

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YRPOtaku169 In reply to DPRagan [2012-07-09 08:45:12 +0000 UTC]

Got it.
Thanks.

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DPRagan In reply to YRPOtaku169 [2012-07-09 09:46:20 +0000 UTC]

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