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Description Well everyone, here is page 3 8D Finally! Woot! Guess who we get to see this time? That's right! Phoenixstep and Swanfeather! Yay!
Let me know if you want the narrative version to be put up, I don't think its necessary and seeing as its 1 in the morning for me I should go to bed.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy! The winners of the contest will be put up some time tomorrow and their gifts some time later this week. See ya later folks!

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Narrative:

Ghostclaw approached Wolfpatch with an innocent expression, "Aren't coughs the reason we brought Phoenixstep along?"
Wolfpatch let out a short 'heh' while smiling, "Indeed. I sent him out with Ryan and Swanfeather to get something for it."
From outside the tunnel they had taken shelter in, the familiar voice of the ever sarcastic Phoenixstep shouted, "RYAN! SHUT UP!" Wolfpatch and Ghostclaw both looked startled and a little bit curious at the exclamation.
After a moment Wolfpatch grinned wickedly, "Speak of the devil..." Ghostclaw looked sideways at Wolfpatch and gave an unsure smile.
The three approaching cats had no sort of herbs in their possession. A tell-tale sign that there were no herbs to be gathered. Phoenixstep looked more than frustrated at Ryan incessant talking.
His eyes narrowed and he gritted his teeth with every word that Ryan spoke. He hissed out, "I swear by Starclan! It's impossible for you to even close your mouth!"
Ryan, however, paid no attention to the ginger medicine cat. Instead he continued to ramble on about nothing. His stories meddling one right in to the other. Swanfeather gave a small smirk before thinking, "Oh sweet revenge."
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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to ??? [2011-12-18 17:46:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Roxy-Cougar [2011-12-18 15:44:41 +0000 UTC]

haha! way to go Wolfpatch!

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to Roxy-Cougar [2011-12-18 17:45:54 +0000 UTC]

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BernardFazling [2011-12-18 15:42:38 +0000 UTC]

A favorite for me, I suppose, is the one who is thinking of "sweet revenge" that one interests me.

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to BernardFazling [2011-12-18 17:45:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, she's pretty fun ^^

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RubyRose364 [2011-12-18 15:37:46 +0000 UTC]

XD hahah poor phonix! I bet tiger thinking the same where ever she is

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to RubyRose364 [2011-12-18 17:45:14 +0000 UTC]

She be sleeping back in the first panel of page 1 XD She's a lazy kitteh XD

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RubyRose364 In reply to Ebonycloud-Graphics [2011-12-18 17:46:24 +0000 UTC]

XD ohh yea! srry i forgot lolz

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Sassywolfgirl [2011-12-18 15:30:20 +0000 UTC]

awww ghosty is so cute!

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to Sassywolfgirl [2011-12-18 17:44:54 +0000 UTC]

Tehe! Thank you!

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Sassywolfgirl In reply to Ebonycloud-Graphics [2011-12-18 21:05:32 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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PurplePepsiWolf [2011-12-18 15:23:53 +0000 UTC]

Ryan: And then i said OATMEAL? R U CRAZY?!

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to PurplePepsiWolf [2011-12-18 17:44:04 +0000 UTC]

Phoenixstep: OMG shut up!!! D8<

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spottedwings654321 In reply to PurplePepsiWolf [2011-12-18 17:28:09 +0000 UTC]

YUS!

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MagaSushi In reply to ??? [2011-12-18 15:06:20 +0000 UTC]

It's finally out! 8D Haha! This is my favorite page so far.

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to MagaSushi [2011-12-18 17:43:12 +0000 UTC]

Its mine too 8D Next page will be my new favorite. Then the one after that... and the one after that... Just kidding XD

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MagaSushi In reply to Ebonycloud-Graphics [2011-12-18 17:58:17 +0000 UTC]

XD Well, you should have pride in your comic. It's really cool!

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Purplepolish In reply to ??? [2011-12-18 14:59:03 +0000 UTC]

Phoneixsteps face is so highlarious!!!!!

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to Purplepolish [2011-12-18 17:42:35 +0000 UTC]

Hehe! Thank you!

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Purplepolish In reply to Ebonycloud-Graphics [2011-12-18 20:29:34 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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dionine [2011-12-18 14:38:26 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha i love the last panel! Phoenixsteps face is priceless!

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to dionine [2011-12-18 17:42:26 +0000 UTC]

Hehe! It was fun to draw 8D

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spottedwings654321 In reply to dionine [2011-12-18 16:38:45 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha, I know!

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AlphaLunaWhiteWolf In reply to ??? [2011-12-18 14:30:56 +0000 UTC]

lolz there always has to be a talker in a group ^^

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to AlphaLunaWhiteWolf [2011-12-18 17:42:12 +0000 UTC]

Indeed XD

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AlphaLunaWhiteWolf In reply to Ebonycloud-Graphics [2011-12-18 18:05:28 +0000 UTC]

lol

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TheAutisticPatriot93 In reply to ??? [2011-12-18 14:10:44 +0000 UTC]

That Ryan cat kinda reminds me of a younger Purdy.

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spottedwings654321 In reply to TheAutisticPatriot93 [2011-12-18 16:39:09 +0000 UTC]

I'm thinking that too.

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TheAutisticPatriot93 In reply to spottedwings654321 [2011-12-18 17:25:22 +0000 UTC]

Yep.

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AlphaLunaWhiteWolf In reply to TheAutisticPatriot93 [2011-12-18 14:31:19 +0000 UTC]

Same here ^^

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TheAutisticPatriot93 In reply to AlphaLunaWhiteWolf [2011-12-18 17:25:32 +0000 UTC]

Yep.

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AlphaLunaWhiteWolf In reply to TheAutisticPatriot93 [2011-12-18 18:05:44 +0000 UTC]

haha ^^

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oSunstar In reply to ??? [2011-12-18 13:44:44 +0000 UTC]

yay its up!

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to oSunstar [2011-12-18 17:41:59 +0000 UTC]

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KisaTheWolf In reply to ??? [2011-12-18 13:42:05 +0000 UTC]

lol awesome page!Love it!

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to KisaTheWolf [2011-12-18 17:41:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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ArooTheWolf In reply to ??? [2011-12-18 13:41:15 +0000 UTC]

wow thats so good

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to ArooTheWolf [2011-12-18 17:41:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Hurricaneclaw In reply to ??? [2011-12-18 13:29:47 +0000 UTC]

XDDDDDDDD POOR PHOENIXSTEP.... I FEEL YOUR PAIN BRO...

And do you mind if I take this chance to critique your entire comic? (Ignore this if you want to lol)

First, I love the plot (So far, anyways.) I like how you added in a lot of originality to the storyline but still kept the 'warrior cats' theme. In the beginning, however, I think the characters could have grieved more. I mean, one day it's all fine and dandy and the next second BAMF everyone's dead. All their family and friends are dead. But then Wolfpatch's like LETS GO ON A JOURNEY EVERYONE~~~ The beginning is kinda rough but other than the fact that the characters keep changing designs (which is understandable) I really like it :3

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to Hurricaneclaw [2011-12-18 17:59:07 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I do agree that there are many things that need improving and the whole "ITS ADVENTURE TIME!" thing needs to go. Unfortunately that would require me to go back and redo chapter 1 and most of chapter 2. I've known for quite a while that it was dumb to just have my characters go trotting off in to the sunset to seek their fortune. Since I'm on to chapter 5 I don't really want to go back and change anything so... What I am going to do is reveal through the next few chapters what a toll its taken on them mentally. They aren't just fine. We shall see that they did indeed grieve. Probably going to to make some BS up for it XD
Actually, I just went back through the first chapter to make sure I didn't lock myself in to a trap. I found that I never mentioned how long it had been since the cats died. Nor did I show any of the other Clan camps. There was a reason that Wolfpatch was out of camp at the time, can't tell you yet ;D But it had been about 4 or 5 days that he was away and since all the cats died. So Tigerlily, Ghostclaw, Phoenixstep and Swanfeather had time to grieve and very their dead. The one we need to worry about is Wolfpatch. He's the one that wanted to up and leave. Hm... What is he up to? XD
So I'm going to do that and reveal through flashbacks what happened that way I don't spend precious time redoing chapter 1 X3
Whadda ya think?

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Hurricaneclaw In reply to Ebonycloud-Graphics [2011-12-18 22:03:20 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, no one wants to redo whole chapters..

And Wolfpatch was away for 4 or 5 days? Veeeery suspicious...

I think it's awesome I LOOK FORWARD TO THE FLASHBACKS! no pun intended

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Lady-Sarah14 In reply to ??? [2011-12-18 13:22:15 +0000 UTC]

Haha LOVE Phoenixstep's face! And Wolfpatch's in the 4th panel's! <3

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to Lady-Sarah14 [2011-12-18 17:41:23 +0000 UTC]

Hehe! Thank you!

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Lady-Sarah14 In reply to Ebonycloud-Graphics [2011-12-18 17:42:15 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! Keep up the amazing comic! xD

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Bramblepeltspro [2011-12-18 13:19:37 +0000 UTC]

blah blah blah she-cat blah blah blah funny smell... teehee X3

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to Bramblepeltspro [2011-12-18 17:41:10 +0000 UTC]

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Bramblepeltspro In reply to Ebonycloud-Graphics [2011-12-18 22:17:49 +0000 UTC]

X3

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ElysLullabye In reply to ??? [2011-12-18 13:08:23 +0000 UTC]

Very nice page, particularly the last panel! Good job!

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to ElysLullabye [2011-12-18 17:40:04 +0000 UTC]

Hehe! Thank you so much!

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ElysLullabye In reply to Ebonycloud-Graphics [2011-12-20 00:00:25 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!

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