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WARNING If you do like this artwork, please DO NOT re-post it on DeviantArt or another website (Facebook, Twitter, Tumblr, etc…), DO NOT use it as a base, and please ASK ME the permission first if you want to use it.Thanks for the understanding!
I felt like drawing these two hugging because... the more I think about it, the less I think this could work between them... .3.
Don't think I want them to break up. Hell no. I want to see them together, but I have no idea how this could end happily between them.
When I created Amanda after creating Jenn, Carmen and Ben with my sis, I was like 15 or 16. Dumb 15/16 years old me was like "oh let's pair them!". DUUUUUUH!
I had no real reason to put them together when you think about it. When I started writing my fanfiction and introduced Amanda, then shown that Ben apparently had feelings for her, this surprised my readers, because it just comes from nowhere.
Reading this fanfiction now I'l like "I really didn't develop their relationship at all... ._. ".
I still like pairing them, and I really want to give them sweet scenes, develop their romance and give them chemistry and I had ideas for all of these. Now what I would like to give them too is a happy ending.
Dumb 15/16 years old me was like "oooooh let's make it overly dramatic and let's kill Amanda, Ben will never get over it!".
No, dumb 15/16 years old me, just no!
When I finally started to want them having a happy ending, I came up with endings that were maybe too happy to be true. Like Ben stops being a thief so he isn't wanted anymore... I don't know why I would think it would be ok, because that's not how Justice works. Ben committed crimes, he must be accountable for his actions and eventually serves jail time. The situation is tricky for Amanda too because she could be seen as an accomplice, when she is not (unless they start helping each other).
So 22 years old me is now like "HOW THE F*CK CAN I MAKE THIS END RIGHT?! ".
Because I WANT to make this end right! I love these two! I want them to be together and happy! ;n;
And finally, no thank you, don't try to give me ideas! I appreciate the fact you would like to help, but 1. I want to do it myself and 2. last time someone tried to give me ideas for my fanfiction, it didn't end well at all, and I don't want to argue with any of you.
I just drew this because I wanted to.
Je voulais dessiner ces deux-là se faire un câlin parce que... plus j'y pense, moins je pense que ça peut marcher entre eux... .3.
Ne pensez pas que je veille qu'ils se séparent. Ça non! Je veux les voir ensemble, mais je ne sais pas comment ça pourrait bien finir entre eux.
Quand j'ai crée Amanda après avoir crée Jenn, Carmen et Ben avec ma soeur, j'avais 15/16 ans. L'idiote de 15/16 ans que j'étais se dit "oh, mettons-les ensemble!". DUUUUUUH!
Je n'avais pas de raison valable pour les mettre ensemble quand on y pense. Quand j'ai commencé à écrire ma fanfiction et que j'ai inclus Amanda, puis montré que Ben avait des sentiments pour elle, ça a surpris mes lecteurs, parce que ça sort vraiment de nulle part.
En lisant cette fanfiction maintenant je me dis "j'ai vraiment pas développé leur relation... ._. ".
J'aime encore les mettre ensemble, et j'ai vraiment envie de leur donner des scènes mignonnes, de développer leur romance et de leur donner une alchimie et j'ai eue des idées pour toutes ces choses. Maintenant ce que j'aimerais leur donner aussi c'est une fin heureuse.
L'idiote de 15/16 ans que j'étais se dit "oooooh rendons ça super dramatique et tuons Amanda, Ben ne s'en remettra jamais!".
Non, l'idiote de 15/16 ans que j'étais, non!
Quand j'ai commencé à vouloir leur donner une fin heureuse, j'ai trouvé des fins qui étaient peut être trop heureuses pour être vraies. Genre Ben arrête d'être un voleur et donc il n'est plus recherché... je sais pas pourquoi je me disais que ce serait ok, parce que c'est pas comme ça que marche la Justice. Ben a commit des crimes, il doit répondre de ses actes et éventuellement purger sa peine en prison. La situation est compliquée pour Amanda aussi parce qu'elle pourrait être prise comme une complice, ce qu'elle n'est pas (à moins qu'ils s'entraident).
Donc la meuf de 22 ans que je suis se demande maintenant "MAIS P*TAIN, COMMENT JE FAIS FINIR CA BIEN, MOI?! ".
Parce que je VEUX que ça se termine bien! Je les aime tout les deux! Je veux qu'ils soient ensemble et heureux! ;n;
Et enfin, non merci, ne me donnez pas d'idées! J'apprécie le fait que vous essayez d'aider, mais 1. j'ai envie de faire ça moi-même et 2. la dernière fois que quelqu’un a essayé de me donner des idées pour ma fanfiction, ça s'est mal terminé, et je ne veux pas me disputer avec qui que ce soit.
J'ai dessiné ça parce que j'en avais envie.
Sly Cooper belongs to Sucker Punch/Sanzaru Games
Benjamin belongs to Goldensoda and me
Amanda belongs to me
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Comments: 98
CosmicZero15 In reply to ??? [2016-07-09 02:16:56 +0000 UTC]
I want to see them together , you can try to rewrite your story , I adore this pairing , hope they can stay together
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EmilieSushi In reply to CosmicZero15 [2016-07-09 09:06:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! ^^
I don't think rewriting the whole thing will be necessary. I'll just add scenes and remove some.
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CosmicZero15 In reply to EmilieSushi [2016-07-09 14:59:28 +0000 UTC]
Ah yeah you can do that as well lol :3
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CosmicZero15 In reply to EmilieSushi [2016-07-09 14:59:27 +0000 UTC]
Ah yeah you can do that as well lol :3
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MrPwner911 In reply to ??? [2016-07-09 01:33:52 +0000 UTC]
Not giving any ideas, but oddly enough, I was talking to about this literally a month ago, while making separate suggestions for his next set of stories.
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EmilieSushi In reply to MrPwner911 [2016-07-09 08:57:57 +0000 UTC]
Aaaaah yes. ^^
I also talked to him recently about this (don't worry, he isn't the person with who it ended badly for trying to give ideas, Jeremy is super sweet!).
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Cambion-Hunter In reply to ??? [2016-07-09 00:58:30 +0000 UTC]
I am interested in seeing where you do take this in your own time, Jennissy.
Good work on this, BTW. ^^
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Cambion-Hunter In reply to EmilieSushi [2016-07-09 14:52:40 +0000 UTC]
No problem, Jennissy.
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SafeGaming89 In reply to ??? [2016-07-09 00:56:30 +0000 UTC]
I did come across one of your fanfics early on but never really adventured myself into reading it more.
On an unrelated topic, my views towards FC's was pretty sour and I only just seemed to care about official pairings. Looking back on it, I was acting immature (heh, weren't we all at one point when we were teenagers) but of course nowadays, I'm pretty open to see how other FC pairings can make a good chemistry together and this image also showcases on whether the two characters could be together or not. Possibilities are endless as some would say heheh.
Anyway, great job with the picture!
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EmilieSushi In reply to SafeGaming89 [2016-07-09 08:56:11 +0000 UTC]
I have only one fanfic and it's written in French. o.o
Are you sure it's mine? o_o
Well, we all change our minds. Reading the description, I think you understand how I feel silly reading what I wrote as a 15/16 years old? XD
Yup, some parts of my story were immature as well.
Thanks! ^^
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SafeGaming89 In reply to EmilieSushi [2016-07-09 09:42:40 +0000 UTC]
'Life After The Gang' I believe it's called, and it's in English whenever I view it on google search btw.
No, just fanfics in general (I was also 16 the first time I started reading them). I'm in my mid 20's now and while I still have a preference for official pairings, I can still acknowledge fan character's being together as well.
And you're welcome!
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EmilieSushi In reply to SafeGaming89 [2016-07-09 09:57:24 +0000 UTC]
Oh yes, I gave this guy persmission to use Ben, if I remember well... <.>
But it's not my story.
Oh, ok. ^^
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SafeGaming89 In reply to EmilieSushi [2016-07-09 10:06:56 +0000 UTC]
Right, then I haven't read your own fanfics in regards to that.
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EmilieSushi In reply to SafeGaming89 [2016-07-09 10:23:12 +0000 UTC]
Well, that's normal. Like I said, it's in French, and on top of that it's on a little French forum, so yeah. o3o
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SafeGaming89 In reply to EmilieSushi [2016-07-09 10:50:42 +0000 UTC]
*sigh* I know you told me when you was on about one particular French forum in an earlier conversation, sorry for wasting your time.
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EmilieSushi In reply to SafeGaming89 [2016-07-09 11:11:30 +0000 UTC]
Oh I did? Ah, sorry, I sometimes forgot who I tell abut this. ;w;
And no, you are not wasting my time. ^^
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SafeGaming89 In reply to EmilieSushi [2016-07-09 11:32:46 +0000 UTC]
It's cool, you obviously keep up with every bit of feedback that you receive from other users, so yeah. Its hard to remember who say's what half the time haha!
And thanks a lot.
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BLIX-KREEG In reply to ??? [2016-07-09 00:43:16 +0000 UTC]
I see your problem, I've actually ran into a similar problem with my comic. So far, it's tsken me over 2 years to fix it! But I think you should get help from a friend with your story developing, even though you don't want it. Trust me, 14 year old me thought she could come up with an entire comic series by herself and just realized at age 20 that she seriously f-cked up!!
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EmilieSushi In reply to BLIX-KREEG [2016-07-09 08:53:38 +0000 UTC]
I know who I could ask if I ever really don't get any ideas. ^^
Thanks for the tips. X3
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EmilieSushi In reply to FlameSly [2016-07-09 08:44:51 +0000 UTC]
Nope, I explained everything in the description. ^^
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Miralith In reply to ??? [2016-07-08 23:43:46 +0000 UTC]
Ohhhhh D:
Now my heart is a little broken, thank you :'D
But you're right, I see your point about Ben and Amanda clearly U_U A love between a person who works for the law and a criminal is very difficult to perform, how can a relationship like that end well without harming one member of the couple? That's something I usually think about Sly and Carm, that's why I think that even if they end together and have kids, they will end divorced or separated ;-; And that was something I had to think deeply when I was planning Connor and Marie's relationship. In this case, I decided that probably Sly's mother chose voluntarily leave her normal life, to live with her husband and their son (because both had to protect Sly from Clockwerk), but it was hard because she had to leave her job, her former home, and her life, a live hidden from the justice and from a monster. It was difficult for me to make she chose that, but despite of that, it conformed to her backstory and her personality. Besides, in the comic McSweeny says Sly's parents bought a farm, so I guess they could have been a normal (rural) life, and happily during at least before Clockwerk found them.
However, when I think about Sly and Carm... I can't see them making a desition like that, Carmelita is a woman proud, headstrog, who believes in justice and she loves her job, so I don't think she could leave her job to stay with Sly, and Sly can't stay with her living a normal life because he's a criminal... and he loves to be a thief.
But now I think... Sly could do something similar to Nathan Drake in Uncharted 4, living a normal life but traveling to the world working as some kind of "treasure hunter" but legally, mmmm who knows~
I hope you can find a good resolution to Ben and Amanda's relationship, I love to see them together, and both deserve be happy, in a way or another :')
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EmilieSushi In reply to Miralith [2016-07-09 08:52:12 +0000 UTC]
I like breaking people's hearts. owo
HAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!!
Welp, that makes like three generations having to deal with the same problem. o.o
Well, since my story was written when Sly 4 wasn't even announced, I wrote it as a continuation to Sly 3, so at least Sly is finally living with Carm, even if he has to hide a secret from her. And since their relationship is based on a lie, well, seperation was normal for them. I also thought about that. ;w;
Yes. ;w;
I'll find something! X3
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Miralith In reply to EmilieSushi [2016-07-09 15:01:48 +0000 UTC]
Nuuuuuu you're bad! you have a dark heart ;-; XDD
Yup, and maybe more generations had that problem... I don't even want to imagine all the relationships of Coopers antecessors XD
It's true u.u
yaaaay! <33
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EmilieSushi In reply to Miralith [2016-07-09 17:02:05 +0000 UTC]
Aaaaw. ;n;
I'm just misunderstood. XD
This is Romeo and Juliet all over again. UnU
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Claire-Cooper [2016-07-08 23:39:00 +0000 UTC]
Honestly they could work.
I mean look at Sly and Carmelita a lot of people didn't think they'd work either but look how well they developed.
I mean the fourth game could have triggered more into that development.
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EmilieSushi In reply to Claire-Cooper [2016-07-09 08:44:32 +0000 UTC]
I think they can work too but I'm like "how can I make this end right?". ;w;
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Claire-Cooper In reply to EmilieSushi [2016-07-09 08:52:43 +0000 UTC]
now that I can understand being the hard part. Neither one would quit.
So how about they possibly form there own kinda Undercover team. They're both still doing what they like and still kinda being within the law.
Like a secret agency lol
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EmilieSushi In reply to Claire-Cooper [2016-07-09 08:58:38 +0000 UTC]
Please don't give ideas, thanks! ;w;
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Claire-Cooper In reply to EmilieSushi [2016-07-09 09:04:36 +0000 UTC]
Sorry hope I didn't bug you or anything it was just a suggestions for amusement really.
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EmilieSushi In reply to Claire-Cooper [2016-07-09 09:05:51 +0000 UTC]
It's fine. It's just that, like I said in the description, I had a bad experience with someone trying to give ideas.
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Claire-Cooper In reply to EmilieSushi [2016-07-10 06:04:40 +0000 UTC]
Oh I understand.
I wouldn't judge you regardless ^^ I understand though I won't give any ideas.
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Flakith In reply to ??? [2016-07-08 23:33:37 +0000 UTC]
À la fin OOO ! Y'aura des lettres qui défileront UuU.... ah merde, on parle pas d'un film OnO....
Erfff... c'est vrai qu'il y a pas mal de choses qu'on voudrait modifier.
Genre XoVeR, il y a..... 9 piges |D déjà oui ! *se rend compte* Putain ._. 9 piges pour accoucher une vraie version finale.... aheum... Bah la première écriture, c'était.... ça ressemble pas du tout à celle que je fais aujourd'hui 8I. Et je me dis tant mieux, sérieux |D.
Il y a même des choses sur les personnages que je veux modifier, mais je ne sais pas comment les gens qui me watchent vont réagir. Genre je songe, depuis un moment, de changer le pseudonyme de Jarreth en juste "Reth". Enfin après, c'est que son pseudonyme, tu me diras, c'est pas son prénom.
Mais ouais, y'a des moments comme ça, on a un peu du mal à planifier des choses car on avait des idées, comme ça, depuis un moment. Je vois le topo, t'inquiète. 8/
Elle est belle l'image OoO !
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2RaymanM64 In reply to Flakith [2016-07-09 10:57:51 +0000 UTC]
Des lettres qui défilent ! O0O tu ma spoilé God of War !
( Petite incrustation o3o )
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EmilieSushi In reply to Flakith [2016-07-09 08:44:03 +0000 UTC]
Oh, elle aime cette blague. u0u
"Reth" pour Jarreth c'est cool. C'est ton personnage, tu en fait e que tu veux. Les gens râleront, c'est pas ton problème. UwU
C'est compliqué, voui. :V
Et merci! UwU
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Flakith In reply to EmilieSushi [2016-07-09 09:18:12 +0000 UTC]
Et j'ai pas honte de cette blague, oh UwU !
Toute façon, faudra que je fasse une sorte d'annonce générale sur le fait qu'on le surnomme Reth désormais |D.
Da rien UwU !
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sonicman613 [2016-07-08 23:27:19 +0000 UTC]
I hope it will work. How about u try to rewrite the story?
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EmilieSushi In reply to sonicman613 [2016-07-09 08:28:31 +0000 UTC]
I don't think rewriting the whole thing would be necessary. I've been thinking of just removing stupid scenes and adding new ones.
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trexking45 In reply to ??? [2016-07-08 23:12:05 +0000 UTC]
I hope they will get married and have kids.
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