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Published: 2006-11-14 19:42:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 3738; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 41
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I didnt realize that it was so lateThis party is really dragging on
If we left quietly do you think they would notice
Things were getting a little too heavy for me
Lets take a walk in the park tonight
Like children we play with the leaves on the ground
You know you always look cute in the moonlight
The way your eyes always shine back at me
Were trying every key to get in the front door
When your tired its always the last one
I can make you coffee if you wanted
And stay up talking about little things
These times we share must not go to waste
It was cold outside lets sit by the fire place
Holding each other closer then ever before
Because were both too scared to let go
Were scared to let go
Scared to let go
Were scared to let go
Scared to let go
Scared to let go
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Comments: 26
stillherelove [2008-06-26 07:45:42 +0000 UTC]
Very pretty.
There are some grammar/ spelling mistakes that if corrected would it make it perfect. If you can't spot them, ask me to point them out. I think I'm going to start writing again. Thanks to some thinking... and thanks to you.
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teraz-znikam [2008-06-15 20:46:12 +0000 UTC]
I love this song...
You are very talented!
I can't speak english very well (so I'm sorry for my bad grammar) but my friend translated your text to Polish for me 'cause I was so interested in what you have written. I must tell you one thing: you are a great writer and I hope you never stop doing that!
Aww, and I want to hear this song!
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FicklePrincess [2008-02-25 00:35:20 +0000 UTC]
So nice, how it tells the hole story.
I love it.
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ScriptedRomance [2007-08-09 14:04:37 +0000 UTC]
this is really awesome! it painted a very vivid picture in my mind as i was reading it. well done hun =]
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Boy-Robot [2007-07-31 01:59:21 +0000 UTC]
i would love to hear this put to music but it speaks for itself aswell. a song that any two people can find meaning in.
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FinalCry [2007-04-30 01:49:50 +0000 UTC]
This song gets stuck in my head all the time and there's not even any music.
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fickshonal [2007-04-15 02:17:01 +0000 UTC]
she's very lucky. it'd be pointless for me to tell her, but i thought maybe you'd get the message. your poetry is amazing.
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willow09 [2007-03-17 10:28:20 +0000 UTC]
Haven't gotten around to listen to your music yet.
The beginning went like it could have been something from a rap song but then the follow up is really good. Reminiscent of Dashboard's Hands Down.
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Wozzles [2007-02-20 20:13:45 +0000 UTC]
im guessing you have a band? there good lyrics man, have a nice flow to them. i could see it on maby a nice acoustic set.
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4Cii [2007-01-20 17:55:53 +0000 UTC]
"You know you always look cute in the moonlight
The way your eyes always shine back at me"
I love it!
great work.
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Emma-Jen [2007-01-04 21:47:48 +0000 UTC]
ohhh!!! i wish i could hear that song!! the poetry is so beautiful!!!
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BitterSweetChelsea [2006-11-15 22:49:23 +0000 UTC]
i really like this one, makes my mind work!
love love <3
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deceiving-smile [2006-11-15 07:33:42 +0000 UTC]
its really cute but can i say one thing...in the last verse thing...or second last??...it says "were scared of..."....i think it should be "we're" with the apostrafy(can't spell either lol)...sorry. u can choose to ignore this...
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kapowlollypops [2006-11-15 00:51:07 +0000 UTC]
This ones my favorite of the two
I can see it acted out in a video and everything
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Richy-Rich [2006-11-14 21:49:32 +0000 UTC]
Very nice, indeed...keep it coming!
"Life is full of decisions...choose wisely"
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ImitationOfLife [2006-11-14 20:40:52 +0000 UTC]
I love that! The flow of it all is just awesome.
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