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emptyness — Gently 04- Bw version
Published: 2003-09-12 15:57:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 98; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 18
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Description Soft arms are wrapped around her body
They gently touch her and
Look for something warm
Something safe

He looks into her eyes
And he sees fear

"I'm worth nothing
I'm a big,ugly,cheap whore
I let other people use me
And use those people
Just like they used me"

Her thoughts scare her

Frightend

"I'm not worth him"

She looks around her
And walks towards the closet

"What...what are you doing with that knife?"

"I'm making the whore pay"

She  places the knife in front of her chest
And she pushes
And pushes
And pushes
And screams
And yells
And the girl slowly dies...

Soft arms are wrapped around her dead body

Cold

Nice and cold
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Comments: 4

militantinsanity [2003-09-19 03:20:40 +0000 UTC]

sad... VERY sad... but a good poem... VERY good....

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morganaarau [2003-09-15 12:26:30 +0000 UTC]

...sad...

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vaoni-stock [2003-09-14 10:47:23 +0000 UTC]

aww she killed herself?? poor thing

wonderful work!

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devilicious [2003-09-12 16:02:11 +0000 UTC]

wow -dark stuff

the ending is very very powerful - liked that a lot

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