victimofauthority [2003-09-21 15:51:28 +0000 UTC]

Thought i recognized that photo... i know all
cool poem, poems about that kinda stuff always have more impact if they are short and well written

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blackest [2003-09-21 11:51:05 +0000 UTC]

hmm..jump for freedom? yey.. that made me remind of a concert i went..hmm..last year.. i went to see BLindZero ( a pt band) but, on the same day, Asian Dub Foundation played and i saw them..and on a song they were like " jump for justice".. and everyone started jumpin ^_^


but yeah..i like ur words..xpecially these ones:

"It seems like the world turns
It's back on me"

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morganaarau [2003-09-19 09:12:04 +0000 UTC]

...tho only thing I don't like about the 11th of september is they way they used it to make two wars...

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militantinsanity [2003-09-19 02:33:06 +0000 UTC]

ooo! i like it! i always do... this one is good! like always!

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devilicious [2003-09-18 21:51:00 +0000 UTC]

almost like a haiku at the last two stanzas

very good i like the end -i'd put an exclamation mark after the word Jump!

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