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Published: 2010-01-23 05:06:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 3037; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 12
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Description Introduciiiiiinnng Lox's competitor, STEF. Finally!

Edit: HE HAS A PAK I JUST FORGOT IT

I was supposed to submit this earlier, but here it is, in all it's late un-glory.

Ok, I look at it now, and I'll tell you, I see so many mistakes in it, I just have to say, this page to me could have been done better. I liked the last panel though. But hey! It's my first comic!

Uhhmm. What else to say? I'm working on the other page, it's nearly done. Whoopie. Hope I don't bore you.

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Irkens © Jhonen Vasquez
Stef by ~AteMozzarella
Lox by *enigmatia
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Comments: 69

enigmatia In reply to ??? [2010-01-23 10:03:48 +0000 UTC]

Haha! VERY well thought! I wouldn't have noticed it until you said so!

Thanks!

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grim-adventures In reply to enigmatia [2010-01-23 10:20:49 +0000 UTC]

Good thing I did!

No problem!

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InvdrDana In reply to ??? [2010-01-23 05:47:15 +0000 UTC]

I love the build-up to the last panel. The timing is great. I think it's hilarious that after all that, Stef just shoots right away. The poses in the last two panels are my favorite. This is turning out nice for your first comic.

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enigmatia In reply to InvdrDana [2010-01-23 10:01:41 +0000 UTC]

I didn't think of build up or timing at all, but I got it anyway? That's really nice Thank you very much though, although it's my first I fear I might be putting TOO much time in the pages, because I could just end up not getting it done in time! Thank you for pointing out the aspects you liked the most, it's a lot better to read things I don't know rather than it being "Yes, I think it's cool!". It's a pleasure to read your comments

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InvdrDana In reply to enigmatia [2010-01-23 23:00:05 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it's great when those things just work out. And you're welcome. How much longer do you have? I know you already have the whole idea in mind, but if it comes down to it, you may want to shorten it somehow. I'd leave that as a last resort though. Comics can be frustrating that way. :/

I'm glad you like my comments. I try to put some effort into them since it can get boring seeing the same kinds of things over and over again.

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enigmatia In reply to InvdrDana [2010-01-24 10:21:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh about a month and a week, five weeks P: I've gotten to 4 pages now, and I don't know if I can finish it all in time, so yes, I am definitely going to shorten it! But yes they are, I'm so glad I'm not doing it for a living!

That's so right, and I try to do the same. It feels like my comments are worth more reading

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InvdrDana In reply to enigmatia [2010-01-25 03:45:37 +0000 UTC]

At least it's a little ways off. Some of other friends haven't even started yet.

I wanted to be cartoonist at one point. I love comics and I've been collecting newspaper comics for years (whenever I can get my hands on them!). But I know I don't have what it takes to be one. All those deadlines and ideas you have to come up with! @.@ I'd rather keep it as an occasional hobby.

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enigmatia In reply to InvdrDana [2010-01-25 08:43:47 +0000 UTC]

Yes, that's right! I saw that the person I am put up against hasn't started, and a friend of mine also won't start submitting until the last minute. I just hope none of them withdraw, especially my competitor! If that happens, I'd probably lose all motivation to continue

That's right, and I too had the same dream xD The thing was, I think I'd be a better art critic and appreciator, rather than the maker. It's whatever you find during time spent learning about the occupation. Of course, I'd still do some art for myself once in a while

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yourdarlingdawn [2010-01-23 05:22:24 +0000 UTC]

OMGOMGOMGOMG ILOVETHISILOVETHISLOVETHIS!! I LOVE THIS!!! X)

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enigmatia In reply to yourdarlingdawn [2010-01-23 09:56:04 +0000 UTC]

Hahah! Just one page?! XD I can see so much I don't like though. I think I've done better on my next page Perhaps my other artwork in general

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yourdarlingdawn In reply to enigmatia [2010-01-23 15:05:09 +0000 UTC]

Well this looks amazing everyone makes a couple mistakes, and I didn't really see any X) All of you're artwork is wonderful, you're a wonderful artist and the work you do just keeps getting better and better

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Camichicamagica [2010-01-23 05:20:02 +0000 UTC]

QUIEN ES QUIEN ?

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enigmatia In reply to Camichicamagica [2010-01-24 00:43:34 +0000 UTC]

Lox = ojos azules
Stef = ojos amarillos

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LaylaTheBlackCheetah In reply to ??? [2010-01-23 05:11:53 +0000 UTC]

XD in the second to last panel there's a dying irken XDDD

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enigmatia In reply to LaylaTheBlackCheetah [2010-01-23 09:55:08 +0000 UTC]

Yes He fell of the edge because he was getting to close to the action.. or he was chasing after his falling carton of nachos?

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LaylaTheBlackCheetah In reply to enigmatia [2010-01-23 18:00:59 +0000 UTC]

ROFL XD

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Leah-the-Red In reply to ??? [2010-01-23 05:11:22 +0000 UTC]

Un-glory! XD Brilliant.

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enigmatia In reply to Leah-the-Red [2010-01-24 00:38:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes, it took me the extra wit to come up with that one

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