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Published: 2019-10-31 19:37:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 61346; Favourites: 1704; Downloads: 108
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Description Another entry in my collection of SCP-inspired creations - using the fifth prompt in the 30-Monster-Challenge - “Mermaid.”



Subject: BA-XX58

Discovered in Venezuela, this anomaly’s actual point of origin remains unknown, as it was found on the property of a wealthy individual, where it was being privately housed as an oddity. A label taped to its tank bore the name "Stargazer." Between the interrogation of witnesses and an investigation of the property, it was discovered that this anomaly was obtained via an individual referred to as “The Caretaker.” Little could be found on the precise details of this transaction, though a small note was eventually discovered in a locked drawer, written on vellum parchment in a cursive script: “Speak your prayers, and your Prayer may speak. Nurture your Prayer, and your prayers may be nurtured. Wrong your Prayer, and your prayers may be wrong.” Torn edges indicate that this may have been part of a larger message. Research is ongoing as to its precise meaning, as well as its originator.

Containment of this anomaly is rather straightforward, as it requires little in the way of environmental furnishings or interaction. A large, reinforced aquarium tank will suffice, supplied with sand or pebble substrate and kept at lower temperatures. Oxygen requirements are minimum, though water should be filtered regularly to maintain a clean environment, and should be of a similar composition to seawater. Feeding requirements are also relatively minimal - it can be adequately sustained by the equivalent of its body weight over the course of a month, though it will eat more if offered. Suitable prey items - prey that it has shown interest in - include various fish and aquatic invertebrates such as squid, though it has also accepted land-dwelling prey such as chickens and goats. As with many creatures found naturally in deeper waters, it has a highly expandable stomach.

While most of its body is analogous to deep sea fish (particularly eels), its most obvious difference is the human-like head and hands at the front of its body, and the flexible, torso-like structure of the upper jaw. The head, while possessing a mouth, is not capable of speech, and seems to be used more for sensory input - mainly sight and smell - and respiration. It may also be used as an additional means of grasping prey items, along with the hands on its lower jaw. These hands do not possess the same level of dexterity of human hands, though they are similar in appearance, and they are often kept in a loosely clasped position. Interestingly for what is presumably a deep sea creature, it does not possess bioluminescence. It’s theorized that the long “antennae” on its body act as additional sensory organs, with studies ongoing to identify what they are meant to perceive. 

Most of the time, this anomaly exhibits very low levels of activity (when not being fed). However, four times per year (noted to align with the solstice/equinox dates), its behavior will change. It will move its upper body into a vertical position, described as a “prayer posture,” with its eyes directed upwards, hands clasped and jaws closed. It will not move from this position until 24-72 hours have passed. If disturbed while in this position, it will become highly agitated, exhibiting an uncharacteristically high degree of activity and hostility towards the offender. 

Note: It has been discovered that this anomaly becomes more active in the presence of individuals of a religious disposition, often tracking them when they are present in the observation room.




As always, let me know what you think! ^_^ And of course, let me know if you have any other ideas for a creature such as this.

Happy Halloween everyone!

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Comments: 126

Marbletism In reply to ??? [2019-11-02 16:47:57 +0000 UTC]

Woah- very creative, and incredible nightmare fuel. Nice job!

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Enothar In reply to Marbletism [2019-11-03 06:30:44 +0000 UTC]

^__^ Thanks!

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Firest [2019-11-02 04:59:36 +0000 UTC]

Now that is freaky.  Good job! 

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Enothar In reply to Firest [2019-11-03 06:30:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^_^

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graniteclaw [2019-11-01 19:41:05 +0000 UTC]

This mermaid reminds me of the gulper eel, except ten billion times scarier to be in the same room with.

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Enothar In reply to graniteclaw [2019-11-02 00:16:52 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I did mainly reference gulper eels, pelican eels, and other such creatures when building this monster. ^_^ They're such strange but cool critters.

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graniteclaw In reply to Enothar [2019-11-02 03:41:42 +0000 UTC]

Ikr? Their heads are so comically huge and their mouths completely unhinge that I kinda wonder how they get around xd

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EbonQueen In reply to ??? [2019-11-01 19:30:19 +0000 UTC]

This is, by far, the most unique and interesting mermaid design I have ever seen

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Enothar In reply to EbonQueen [2019-11-02 00:15:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^_^

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GrimmuzA [2019-11-01 19:14:18 +0000 UTC]

Ok, instant fan. Hello.   

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Enothar In reply to GrimmuzA [2019-11-02 00:14:07 +0000 UTC]

Hello! ^_^ And thank you!

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CrazedCatLady77 [2019-11-01 19:06:55 +0000 UTC]

That is amazing! And horrible...

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Enothar In reply to CrazedCatLady77 [2019-11-02 00:13:49 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Thank you!

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Masterteabs [2019-11-01 19:00:40 +0000 UTC]

*kids violently screaming*

*me*   

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Enothar In reply to Masterteabs [2019-11-02 00:13:40 +0000 UTC]

^____^

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Ghost-Stone [2019-11-01 18:23:00 +0000 UTC]

spook

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Enothar In reply to Ghost-Stone [2019-11-02 00:13:10 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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MsTeraLn [2019-11-01 17:51:09 +0000 UTC]

This is very interesting for it to be fixated on religion and prayer.

However, when I saw in the Description that it had hands, I was looking all over the place and thinking "those have got to be some very tiny hands" and then I saw the jaw WAS the hands and visa versa.

But I love your take on Mermaids! This is really awesome and your Subjects seem to get more and more amusing and scarier with each creation and upload.

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Enothar In reply to MsTeraLn [2019-11-02 00:09:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^_^ These have been really fun to put together, and I'm glad people have been enjoying them so much. Admittedly starting to feel like I'm just setting my own bar higher and higher each time, but I suppose that kind of self-inflicted pressure is just a necessary part of being a creator. XD

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MsTeraLn In reply to Enothar [2019-11-02 01:49:23 +0000 UTC]

I think you are doing a great and wonderful job!

Keep it up, O Awesome Subject Creator!

What will you think of next?

I'll be seeing soon enough...

BTW; I was checking out some of the other Comments, and I saw that you where chatting with another 1 of your Watchers on how none of your Current Subjects are prone to evil and/or extreme violence.

At least not yet anyway...     

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Enothar In reply to MsTeraLn [2019-11-02 03:09:27 +0000 UTC]

Yup. There are some more dangerous ones in the works. ^_^ It may still be a while before some of them are brought into the light, but they're there. Waiting for their turn.

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MsTeraLn In reply to Enothar [2019-11-02 09:15:16 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait for them to make their appearance!

Bring them ON!     

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Unialien In reply to ??? [2019-11-01 15:52:46 +0000 UTC]

Terrifying and beautiful!

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Enothar In reply to Unialien [2019-11-02 00:02:06 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Thanks!

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Unialien In reply to Enothar [2019-11-02 00:51:13 +0000 UTC]

It is a pleasure!

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SelenaRH [2019-11-01 15:12:21 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully done creature. I love that you leave this a little open ended, leaves room for some fun speculation: Such as maybe it was once someone highly devoted to their religion, that betrayed their god, and was cursed, so they pray every equinox and solstice for redemption.

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Enothar In reply to SelenaRH [2019-11-02 00:01:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^_^ I considered putting in a little more detail, but then decided to leave it as it was. I do think that sometimes it's better to leave certain things more open to interpretation, particularly when it comes to horror and monsters (such as SCPs). Leaves them with that "unknown" element, and lets people have fun imagining stuff (like, what you have there is pretty cool). That's my personal opinion, anyway. 

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warrior31992 [2019-11-01 15:07:37 +0000 UTC]

Interestingly stunning 

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Enothar In reply to warrior31992 [2019-11-01 23:51:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^_^

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warrior31992 In reply to Enothar [2019-11-02 00:08:49 +0000 UTC]

Your Welcome

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Lady-Xythis In reply to ??? [2019-11-01 14:53:00 +0000 UTC]

Well that's thoroughly creepy. Well done!

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Enothar In reply to Lady-Xythis [2019-11-01 23:50:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^_^

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NewHorizontStudio In reply to ??? [2019-11-01 14:26:53 +0000 UTC]

Amazing

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Enothar In reply to NewHorizontStudio [2019-11-01 23:50:37 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Thanks!

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TricellBunny In reply to ??? [2019-11-01 14:21:59 +0000 UTC]

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Enothar In reply to TricellBunny [2019-11-01 23:50:27 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. I would say that its head is perhaps comparable in size to a human's, maybe a tad larger? So its jaws might have a base length of approximately 2/3 the height of the average human...? Meaning its entire body would be fairly long, including the tail. I'm admittedly just guesstimating.

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0Luna123 In reply to TricellBunny [2019-11-01 19:22:23 +0000 UTC]

Yes

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RyuseDraws In reply to ??? [2019-11-01 14:11:00 +0000 UTC]

How nice. This piece is great! o(^◇^)o

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Enothar In reply to RyuseDraws [2019-11-01 23:26:12 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Thank you!

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bluewingfairy [2019-11-01 12:20:20 +0000 UTC]

Good morning, So Cool, like the pose!!!!!!!.

Happy Halloween!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! .     

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Enothar In reply to bluewingfairy [2019-11-01 23:22:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^__^

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bluewingfairy In reply to Enothar [2019-11-02 00:38:34 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!❤️😊.

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ShadowLambb [2019-11-01 10:05:33 +0000 UTC]

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Enothar In reply to ShadowLambb [2019-11-01 23:22:06 +0000 UTC]

^__^

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RavenCorona [2019-11-01 08:26:34 +0000 UTC]

Creepy, yet awesome. I don't really like mermaids, that this one caught my attention.

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Enothar In reply to RavenCorona [2019-11-01 23:21:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^_^

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TheMindGod In reply to ??? [2019-11-01 08:08:08 +0000 UTC]

Damn I love this so fucking much

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Enothar In reply to TheMindGod [2019-11-01 23:15:50 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Thanks!

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Kelsonthomas [2019-11-01 07:38:31 +0000 UTC]

Holy F***... Awesome work!

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Enothar In reply to Kelsonthomas [2019-11-01 23:11:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^_^

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