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Published: 2019-10-25 03:52:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 62676; Favourites: 1605; Downloads: 105
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Description
Another entry in my collection of SCP-inspired creations - using the fourth prompt in the 30-Monster-Challenge - “Naga.”
Subject: BA-XX76
This anomaly was discovered near a remote village in Thailand, where it was being cared for by locals who regarded it as a sacred creature. Since its acquisition, it has adapted well to its current containment facility. Containment consists of a large climate-controlled enclosure designed to replicate its tropical native environment, with the addition of an artificial cave appropriately sized to serve as a sleeping area. Prey items should be introduced to the enclosure once per week - a preference for live prey has been noted - with variety in size and type. Any personnel entering the enclosure must state their presence and the purpose of their visit upon entry.
Each head is fully sentient and capable of independent thought and speech, and they are often observed quietly conversing with each other when not involved in direct conversation with personnel. They have been noted to speak in a mixture of dialects from Southeast Asia, as well as scattered English since its relocation, and an as-of-yet unidentified language. Most of its conversations seem to consist of almost child-like gossip and commentary regarding individuals - including information that was never disclosed to it. By extension, it is fully aware whenever it is being lied to. Due to the informational hazard that this represents, only certain individuals are allowed to interact with this anomaly. Note: Special care should be taken if and when it expresses a desire to “play,” as it often underestimates its physical capabilities, resulting in the injury of personnel.
As it enjoys - and even requests - regular interaction, several conversations have taken place since its containment. Through these dialogues, staff have learned a number of things about the anomaly itself, including its age (104 years at the time of recording), individuals it has known throughout its life, and that it originated from what it simply refers to as “Mother.” When questioned further about this last topic, it gave surprisingly few details, aside from that she is “vast as the waters.” Further research is ongoing.
As before, let me know what you think, or if you have any other ideas for a creature such as this.
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Comments: 133
CometStarfall In reply to ??? [2019-10-26 01:35:23 +0000 UTC]
The SCP esque history is really working here. I could totally believe this being something within the established universe.
Art is great, story is great, keep up the good work!
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Enothar In reply to CometStarfall [2019-10-26 17:09:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! ^_^ Honestly if people keep enjoying and supporting these, I might eventually try to build them into actual SCPs. That could be fun.
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CometStarfall In reply to Enothar [2019-10-26 18:35:25 +0000 UTC]
I say that if you truly enjoy it/want to do it, do it! I'd love to see it! You've already made a great summary/opening for them.
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ThelxlBloodlxlPrince [2019-10-25 23:02:48 +0000 UTC]
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Speciesunkn0wn In reply to ??? [2019-10-25 22:50:43 +0000 UTC]
I'm imagining "Mother" as a female jormungandr
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Enothar In reply to Speciesunkn0wn [2019-10-26 17:05:13 +0000 UTC]
Some kind of massive serpent creature? Perhaps. ^_^ It does seem most likely.
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Kenji195 [2019-10-25 22:14:49 +0000 UTC]
Maybe it's not original (I mention "maybe" because I don't know, I see your description says "inspired", but still XP), but I like this concept, a snake with 2 bodies instead of a normal head, I really like it and the drawing looks freaking nice!
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Enothar In reply to Kenji195 [2019-10-25 22:32:36 +0000 UTC]
If there is a similar SCP, I don't know about it yet, though I'm sure people will let me know if there is. ^_^ I just like the concept of the Foundation, so I felt like making some monsters that could fit into that type of mythos. As for this specific monster, I was just inspired by two-headed snakes, honestly. XD
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PeachFlair [2019-10-25 22:13:34 +0000 UTC]
dlkfajslkdfj I love them, they are so cool looking!! Also the writing description thingy is sooo good too!!!
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Koffee-holic In reply to ??? [2019-10-25 21:06:32 +0000 UTC]
This was on the 'what's hot' page. I saw it and said 'that makes me think of an SCP', then I clicked on it and that's what you intended it to be! So I think this is a definite success!
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Enothar In reply to Koffee-holic [2019-10-25 22:23:09 +0000 UTC]
I didn't know it made it onto that page. Cool though. ^_^ And thank you very much!
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TaaFTS In reply to ??? [2019-10-25 20:42:04 +0000 UTC]
*Cough*
Were all in this together..
Nice by the way
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TrainerblueTube [2019-10-25 19:37:04 +0000 UTC]
I like it, however one tiny thing in the description is the 104, years should be given as a unit, considering this is meant to be a scientific log.
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Enothar In reply to TrainerblueTube [2019-10-25 19:44:09 +0000 UTC]
Can and will do! ^_^ Admittedly wrote this up half-asleep, so I appreciate the critique.
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SelenaRH In reply to ??? [2019-10-25 17:01:06 +0000 UTC]
Such an interesting and fantastic creature! I'd be interested to know if it feels regret when it accidentally hurts people when playing.
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Enothar In reply to SelenaRH [2019-10-25 19:23:35 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! ^_^
And perhaps it does, though the degree might be somewhat dependent on how well it knows (and likes) the person. If it's someone it likes, then yes, it would likely feel regret for hurting them.
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SelenaRH In reply to Enothar [2019-10-26 00:27:06 +0000 UTC]
That makes sense for such an alien and child-like mindset (at least that's the impression I got). I imagine it would be more careful with people it's fond of if it did hurt them on accident.
Does it like picnics? :3
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Enothar In reply to SelenaRH [2019-10-26 03:38:14 +0000 UTC]
Not sure if it knows what a picnic is, precisely, but it might be curious enough to want to understand what the fuss is about.
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ChickenLittleLover In reply to ??? [2019-10-25 16:22:36 +0000 UTC]
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Senyin [2019-10-25 15:56:09 +0000 UTC]
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