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Promiser 《給予承諾之人》(Vi x Caitlyn)Part 1
Part 2
Part 3 (end)
Chinese (中文原文版本)
www.pixiv.net/member_illust.ph…
說好的第一章節1P~22P
(※未公佈的部分與此篇無關，只有購入實體本才能看到Y///////Y)
Here’s the first part of my doujinshi as promised! (※the second part is unrelated to the story therefore remains exclusive as part of the physical copy.)
Thanks ivallinen & thevanuiguard !!!
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Comments: 4
This is a lie Vi and we both know that 😂😁😉
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I feel it best to simply add my review to the first page, rather than spreading them across multiple different ones.
To put it quite bluntly, this comic....is astounding. I think it goes without saying that you're certainly doing your part to promote the pairing. In that vein, allow me to give you a general review.
The story is simplistic. As I've seen, there's not all that much to expect, but that's not a bad thing. It's a sweet simplicity that really just lets us, as viewers, enjoy the art and interaction taking place. There's no real need to muddle itself up with numerous allusions and the like when we're all here to see Vi and Caitlyn. The story knows what it is, and sticks to that. I'm sure you are capable of going for more complicated interactions and stories, but I'll be honest that I enjoy the straightforwardness of this one.
Regarding the characters themselves, they're fairly spot-on for the setting and tend to act as one would expect. Vi is somewhat abrasive, but certainly not a stone-heart. Caitlyn is a workaholic, and the comic delves into the reasonings behind that, as well as somewhat engaging just why Caitlyn respects Vi, and vice versa. There's not much to show them beyond their early interactions, but then there doesn't need to be. This is establishing their relationship, not digging into their personal beliefs.
The artwork is impeccable, being a black-and-white illustration, it's still nice to see that the lines are crisp and the art smooth.
The last technical aspect I should mention would be the translation. The artist, as I understand, is from Taiwan. In that vein, I'm rather pleased to see that the artist has made the move to translate it for view in English speaking regions. It's by no means a necessity, and I feel thanks are in order. It's quite clear and easily understandable, to the point that I would be very surprised if the artist wasn't a native-speaker.
Thank you very much for this art, and the continued use of your talents in the Vi/Caitlyn fanbase.
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