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Published: 2001-03-25 01:18:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 3010; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 170
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I didn't know love until I met you.Nothing in my life had ever felt so true.
You were the reason I went day to day,
Washing all of my depression away.
I wish I could make everything all right,
Every second I think of that night.
The way you broke my heart with only few words.
Did more to me than being stabbed by a thousand swords.
I didn't know pain until I met you.
Even know, nothing has ever felt so true.
You used to be the reason I went day to day,
But now your make me wish I could fade away.
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Comments: 28
If you show all your so called "Love" it means that you didn't realy falled in love. First love is forever.
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i know its inevitable, but i never want to feel this way..i know its coming at some point in my future. ive decided its worth the risk..i think.
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Its true...I know how that feels. I like how its written.
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OMG this is good stuff, sorry for ur feelings though
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I know that feeling. This is really reall good work. =]
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I can relate to that right now in my life. It really touched me. Good job.
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been there, felt that
feels shit doesnt it?
this is very good, you grasp and convey the concept quite well. keep it up
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I didn't know pain until I met you.
Even know, nothing has ever felt so true.
You used to be the reason I went day to day,
But now your make me wish I could fade away..
-nuff said (again, no LOVE deviation vote )
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......only a few words....that mad me sad too......
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Hmm...yea, this flows very well indeed, and has a very true to life theme as well. Keep it up
Supaspoida
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very sad.. and very true... i feel like that right now as a matter of fact.. great poem. it touched me very deeply. and i can relate!
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I dont usually like rhyming poems but this one is really cool... Nice.
isonica.com
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jesus ben, your real poetic, thats a real good poem.. i know exactly how you feel.. and what makes this even better.. is that it came from inside, good work ;D
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Very nice man, i can relate to it. btw, shouldn't "Even know, nothing has ever felt so true." be "Even now..."
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This is really good. Pretty much how i feel right now. Nice job.
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i think at one time or another we all feel this way. I've been there. Great poem!!
~*~Never Stop Dreaming
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/me puts this in his ben scrap book
my lil benie's first deviation and he wrote a poem for me! aw
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oooo ben depressed = mean ben D-: nice job with the wording in this one ben , great way describing inner feelings , the fade away part really hung me for a sec , had to read it over one more time :-D
-loco !
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