HOME | DD
EvanStanley — GOTF issue 4 page 14
Published: 2008-03-29 05:26:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 75660; Favourites: 550; Downloads: 402
Redirect to original
Description
Issue 4, Page 14.Yup, yup, yup, page. Silver looks Fabulous(!) in a skirt... Sorry, I'm kinda tired. And hey! I remembered to draw Shahra's ring this time.
Ooh, Sliver's doin' some character development here... I'm just trying to wrap up the issue, I've got a great surprise for the end...
Judas Priest, Comment!
NEXT PAGE:
[link]
PREVIOUS PAGE:
[link]
Related content
Comments: 67
Awww poor Silver xD At least Shahra is there for him :3 I love the way you drew Silver on the last panel. He looks adorable!! xD "Im probably going nuts" LOL xDDD You draw Shahra SO well O.O
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Heh, some nice development there! Keep it up!
Lol, "...In a skirt!" Yups, Vic Mignogna will most definitely be proud of you XD
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
totally awesome as always! Can't wait for more! ^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Ysy! You continued this comic! I though you gave up from this bacuse of other comics you have to do, it must be really hard to do them all. Its really cool you don`t give up from your stuff so easy like me.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
awesome ^_^
silver looks so cute on the last panel ><
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Hi there
Hehehe Really fab page ^^ Good job!
Euan
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
^^ it looks great! Love their expression and the deepness of the comic. But you spelled promise wrong lol
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I was too tired to check my spelling-- I'll fix it soon.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
aaawh Silver is soooooo cute in the last panel. And the dialog is sweet too! I really hope that Silver will smile in the end. Cute!!!
I also love how u make these pages like an old book kind of style, with the paper kind of style. (don't really know how to describe it... xD) But it looks very good, it really gives u the feeling that they r inside that book. ^^
Can't wait for the next page!!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
This page makes me smile so much.. you tried so good on this page
Awsome great job! i must fav this page
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
It's great how you've really tied this in to where "Secret Rings" has left off. And it's also great to see both Shahra and Silver stepping onto higher ground, despite being known as mild-mannered, or at least unconfident.
On to visual critique. Your coloring and lineart are fine, but now I have a thought - (though it may take you a lot of effort) - is it possible for the background to look more... sand-y? All I'm suggesting is that you maybe put in some sand patterning when you colour, because these mounds look a little plain - I personally think you can give an emphasis on this. It might be a little difficult to work out how (I'm sure there is a tutorial somewhere) but I'm also confident it's within your ability.
Great job! I gotta fave this one, the pact that Shahra makes to Silver keeps making me smile. ^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Yeah, I'll try to actually put some effort into the background next time. And I really appreciate the critique.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1