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Published: 2011-05-14 08:24:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 124; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Version AWrapped in your memory
chained to your grave
a reminder unworthy
of a time that I save
for the moments of silence
the feelings of doubt
that no form of penance
can leave me without
Version B
Chained to your memory
a masterless slave
a reminder unworthy
of a time that i save
for the moments of silence
the feelings of doubt
that seethes from the remnants
of a life gone without
Version C
Wrapped in your memory
chained to your grave
a reminder unworthy
of a time that I save
for the moments of silence
the feelings of doubt
that seethes from the remnants
of a life gone without
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Comments: 1
CrazyZimFangurl [2011-05-18 02:10:49 +0000 UTC]
i love them both a ton but for some reason i like b more- i think that starting out with a more serious word like 'chained' really sets a dark mood, while 'wrapped' has a softer effect....
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