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FalseIntrospection — Excoriate by-nc-nd
Published: 2011-06-10 01:37:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 189; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description He took the blade to his wrist
and first he carved an L.
A sharp breath, another twist,
a tiny taste of hell.
He closed his eyes and made a fist
and as he wondered Y.
All that he had done; a list
of things he should have tried.
Which lingered like a thickened mist
then slowly came the D
the only one He'd ever kissed
was all his mind would see.
No longer wanting to exist
he took the time that day
to nick the artery He'd missed
when he gashed a final A.
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Comments: 4

Bakape [2011-06-30 09:33:45 +0000 UTC]

Breathtaking! Very emotionally captivating! I even cried. Beautiful!

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FalseIntrospection [2011-06-10 02:06:56 +0000 UTC]

To be honest the best ones are the first few i wrote, everything past them is shit

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CrazyZimFangurl [2011-06-10 02:02:18 +0000 UTC]

so far ive loved all youve written! you have some deep stuff..

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sexpet666 [2011-06-10 01:53:41 +0000 UTC]

You write some nice sentences though o:

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