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Published: 2003-09-14 03:51:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 126; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 26
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Description A troubled girl seeks refuge
in the middle of the woods.
Nothing but a silent soul
crying under her hood.
Nobody there to watch.
No predators by her side
Just a girl all alone;
a girl trying to hide.

Nobody can find her,
she's hidden well for good.
She ran away from the social world
because no one understood.
She now keeps to herself
and writes poems within her mind.
Everything has its safe keeping
hidden in places that no one could find.

The days go by
and the nights are long.
You can see the stillness in her eyes.
She's been frozen here for ages
as the world passes her by.
Not yet found, she's still a secret,
hidden in the middle of the woods.
She's all alone. She's dead and cold.
She's hidden here for good.
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Comments: 4

silentscream [2003-10-04 06:32:17 +0000 UTC]

She now keeps to herself
and writes poems within her mind.

A+

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lesseroflindsey [2003-09-14 18:35:55 +0000 UTC]

hey megan. I enjoy this peice. Very good imagrey. a little confused with the rythming situation, but very beutiful. great job!

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aislyn26 [2003-09-14 04:37:49 +0000 UTC]

Good imagery. I think the flow could use a little work. Very nice work though...I like it.

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lilitheternity [2003-09-14 03:55:13 +0000 UTC]

very beautiful...sad...nice imagry in here too.

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