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FalseReflection — Watch Me Die
Published: 2004-01-12 03:01:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 117; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 5
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I present to you my death,here right before your eyes.
Watch the blood race down my wrist,
the formation of tears in my eyes.
I present to you the power to kill,
within my grasp I hold a knife.
This is the power to calm a feeling,
the power to end a life.
I present to you a twisted scream,
a repercussion of my pain.
My lips are introduced to saline
from the very tears I drain.
I present to you all that's morbid,
with a smile, I bathe in my blood.
My body is so distorted,
it's the origin of this great flood.
I present to you the moment I perish,
my very passing, I have longed to die.
This scarred memory, I hope you cherish it,
for it was the only time you ever cried...
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Comments: 6
The ending was magnificent...the rhyme is perfet, amazing to sum it up
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Megan,
what can I say that I haven't said before.
Each individual poem is so great.
I guess all I can say is "another beaut. another great peice. Another great job"
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it's kind of ironic that i have a really old poem called "watch me die"... i just added it a few minutes ago as a matter of fact... if anyone feels like wasting their time reading it, feel free to do so. Megan, this poem is really awesome (thumbsup)
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this is beautiful....it brought back memorys.......i can really relate to this 
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It would be nice to force all the other people to finally cry for you. But even if you're gone, they still just go on with their lives. The selfish bastards. Great poem, btw.
If you can speak french, my poem "C'est ce que je suis" might be somewhat applicable.
Great poem.
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-Peace out.
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