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(from John's POV. the end of "the great game," and John is trying to sort out just what's going on)----------
Ba-bum
Ok, ok calm down. Don't panic; Think. Look around. What's going on?
Ba-bum
Alright, there is a sniper marker on you're chest. Ok, that's not new. Sherlock is holding a gun. Definitely not new. There is a bomb across the room and I'm not in a war zone. That is new.
Ba-bum ba-bum ba-bum
Ok! Ok ok, calm! Keep calm. Maybe Sherlock has a plan. I've just gotta look at him. I've been around him for a while; maybe I've picked up on how to deduce a person from one glance. Oh God, please let me have learned something from this!
Ba-bum
Whoa. He's looking back. And he looks... scared. And determined. And it completely calms me down. How? How does he do that?
Ba-bum
That look... You seriously want to...
Ba-bum
Alright. Fine. I'll just bullshit a plan to get us out of here alive, you marvelous idiot.
Ba-bum
Ok, so he's aiming. Aiming. Aiming Aiming... at the bomb. What!?
Ba-bum Ba-bum Ba-bum
What, is he crazy? He'll blow all of us up. I know he wants to get rid of Moriarty, but God! This is a bit much! Doesn't he care about he himself living or dying!? You idiot!
Ba-bum Ba-bum Ba-bum Ba-bum
He's talking now. Alright! Look! There's got to be some protection of some sort around here. Ugh, but there's really no place to get shelter quickly except the poo- THE POOL! Yes! Sure, we'll have to avoid the celling falling in as well, but it'll help for the time being. We just have to stay around the top after the initial shock, and-
Ba-bum
He stopped talking. Damn it. I just have to wait for him to pull the trigger.
Ba-bum ba-bum
Well, come on. What are you waiting for?
Ba-bum ba-bum ba-bum
Damn it all, Sherlock! Are you trying to drive me cra-
BANG
Ba-bum
1Ba-bum
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Ba-bum
Ba-
Damn. That man hires good snipers.
Ba bum
I have just come to realize that chlorine and newly made bullet wounds do not mix well. At all.
Ba bum
It fucking hurts, but I've got to keep focused. I grabbed Sherlock when I pushed off so- wait. Where is he?
Ba-bum ba-bum ba-bum
No no NO! Where is he! I grabbed him. Around the waist. I FELT him! He should be right here, right-
Ba-bum ba-bum ba-bum ba-bum
It's getting harder to breath! Why can't I swim up? Wait. I think... I'm caught on something? Or did they just shoot my leg, too? I can't even tell where the pain is coming from anymore!
Ba-bum ba-bum ba-bum ba-bum ba-bum
No... I don't want to go out like this. Not like this...
Ba-
Hm. It's dark. I wonder if I'm dead.
Well, I hear no heartbeat in my ears, so I'll just go with that.
Why did it have to end like this. I never thought I'd die because of a madman.
Speaking of Sherlock... I wonder if he's dead, too. Well, I sure hope not. He's got too much of an impact he'd never be able to inflict on the world if he died. It'd be such a waste for someone like him, with that brilliant mind of his, and his good instincts and... those amazing... captivating... beautiful eyes...
God. Why am I even thinking about him of all people in my dying thoughts? It isn't enough that you've taken over my life, but my mind as well? Ridiculous...
Well... Maybe it's not all that bad.
B
He has... given my life a bit of meaning, after all.
Ba
Even if I have just been a babysitter/stand-in-for-a-skull to him, I really did like being around him. I liked following him everywhere, looking for clues and murderers. I liked having dinners with him, however short they were. I liked watching him rant at crappy TV that just happened to be on. I liked watching him deduct things. I like how he puts his hands in a praying position when he's thinking. I like his reaction when he figures out something. I like how he acts like a child when he's upset. As crazy as it sounds, I even like fighting with him. I just like him.
Ba-
Maybe like isn't the best word for all of that. Maybe... love?
Ba-b
Yeah. Love. I love Sherlock Holmes.
Ba-bu
And I really don't mind thinking that now. I don't mind dying for him. Because it just feels so damn good.
Ba-bum
Di... did i just hear something? Is someone shouting at me?
Ba-bum
Sherlock?
Ba-bum ba-bum
Well, speak of the devil, it is him.
Ba-bum ba-bum ba-bum
He's alive.
Ba-bum ba-bum ba-bum ba-bum
Ha. That should be the least of my worries right now. My shoulder is killing me, I still feel chlorine water in my throat, my clothes are soaked, and not just in water, and my heart is pounding in my ears.
Ba-bum ba-bum
Oh, who cares. He's alive.
Ba-bum
Thank God, he's alive.
Ba-bum
----------
As John slowly opened his eyes, he was met with an expression he thought he'd never see on Sherlock. Genuine, heartfelt worry. He was thinking so many things to say to him. His sudden realization, his happiness to see he was alive, his honest opinion that Sherlock was probably the most beautiful thing he could think of at the moment. But the only thing that he could say after he coughed up the water and shook his head was:
"You really shouldn't yell at unconscious people. It's kind of pointless."
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Comments: 23
Zeiloo [2011-08-17 19:56:06 +0000 UTC]
I really liked this <3 cute john ♥ his thoughts were so awsome XD I could imagine him really thinking all this stuff in this situation XD
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choconekoXD [2011-03-31 22:21:39 +0000 UTC]
ooooohh! this is cool! i want to read the "Sherlock's POV" *w*
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Fara4X3 In reply to choconekoXD [2011-04-01 01:06:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ^^ I might do a Sherlock POV, but I'm not sure if I'd get his thinking process down (since it's not looking back or anything, but right as its happening) >o<
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Arencarie [2011-03-28 23:25:33 +0000 UTC]
Wow... just wow... No comment. XD Lol
I read literally the first couple of lines and was like "Yeah... She's having a fangasm" Cute.
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zuzuKH [2011-03-28 03:40:49 +0000 UTC]
This is really goood! and totally what wold be going through his mind, especially the loving sherlock bit. <3
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zuzuKH In reply to Fara4X3 [2011-03-28 04:22:59 +0000 UTC]
I can't write john. Sherlock is easy but John is just John and stuff, so the way you did it was really awesome. I envy your skill
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Fara4X3 In reply to zuzuKH [2011-03-28 04:32:23 +0000 UTC]
Ha! John is super easy compared to Sherlock! I envy the fact that you think it's easy to write him
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zuzuKH In reply to Fara4X3 [2011-03-28 04:39:49 +0000 UTC]
lol i think it's cuz i'm more like Sherlock. I have actually been diagnosed with minor sociopathism so yeah. but they said that when i'm on the internet i'm perfectly normal. I laughed.
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Fara4X3 In reply to zuzuKH [2011-03-28 04:47:00 +0000 UTC]
lol Well it's easier talking with people online. You don't have to worry about what you're going to say since you can just keep re-writing what you want to say until it's perfect. It's quite convenient ^^
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zuzuKH In reply to Fara4X3 [2011-03-28 04:58:56 +0000 UTC]
true. but i mainly laughed at the fact that they said i was 'normal' anywhere. i mean on the internet especially, i go mental-er in a different way on the internet. It's called fandom lol
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AphroditeEyes [2011-03-28 03:05:34 +0000 UTC]
AHH! love!! SO CUTE, and totally believable (:
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Fara4X3 In reply to AphroditeEyes [2011-03-28 03:14:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad it sounds believable >o<
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UponAStarr [2011-03-28 03:04:13 +0000 UTC]
I love the way the heartbeat fades back in lovely! <3
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Fara4X3 In reply to UponAStarr [2011-03-28 03:13:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I was hoping that people could tell just what the Ba-bums were doing there X3
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