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FatalHolds — The Blooding 23

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Description Elvafay's lifeless body went limp in Alacrity's grasp as her neck loudly snapped. Knowing that her opponent couldn't survive a broken neck, Alacrity loosened her grip.
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Comments: 6

Bookstove [2025-01-13 08:57:33 +0000 UTC]

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Sage2000 [2011-07-20 01:06:22 +0000 UTC]

Look at those perfect muscles in the right place.

Great shot overal!

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MugenJustice [2010-12-16 08:12:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm planning a series of my own, and I envisioned this exact kill in one of the scenes!



Beautiful death, is all i can describe this.

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Altais494 [2010-08-28 19:12:11 +0000 UTC]

I love Alacrity, but I was also really feeling Elvafay, her outfit, cocky attitude and use of powers made her really interesting. Especially how you made her seem in the text. I actually felt bad for her death. Great character. Would love to see her have her own story perhaps, a part of her past or something. Anyways love the work keep it up.

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Psycho333 [2010-08-24 10:35:37 +0000 UTC]

Sweeeety work

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Presteza [2010-08-24 04:10:04 +0000 UTC]

love the dramatic pose & shadows

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