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fieldsofjoy — Thinking about you
Published: 2011-08-06 07:57:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1493; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 55
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Description I haven't stopped thinking about you
Not one goddamned day since I first laid eyes on you
And it's not fair, is it?
That we don't want the same things
That I won't let myself fall in love again
That I'm too afraid to lose myself
Because love isn't all I used to think it was
When I was a stupid fucking kid
Maybe I'm capable of the kind of eternal love
I used to believe in, but others aren't
Besides I already gave that love away
And I'm pretty sure there's nothing left
Not even a drop for you or me
All that's left is a bloody skeleton
For everyone to see
Doesn't matter
Doesn't make me stop thinking of you
And wishing things could be different
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Comments: 6

Dissent-Is-Cool [2011-12-02 06:24:58 +0000 UTC]



Very emotional. You're a good writer.

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WilloftheWarrior [2011-08-07 23:14:10 +0000 UTC]

ok, that broke my heart. Its good to hear you voice your emotions in this way. I am sorry you are so torn inside. I hope that you will find peace. I like your writing.

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DavidFolkie [2011-08-06 19:53:46 +0000 UTC]

Intense emotion expressed with vivid imagery and a deceptively simplicity. Great work.

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DoktorSpankenstein [2011-08-06 17:20:11 +0000 UTC]

I know that feeling...
You expressed it very well.

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Gunmetalblack [2011-08-06 15:11:36 +0000 UTC]

Nice work! It has some real emotional content to it. Very well done!

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EpiphanyMedia [2011-08-06 12:51:40 +0000 UTC]

Your melancholy heart speaks to the fading spark that lies within my core.

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