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FilthyBitch — destroyer
Published: 2005-10-29 13:43:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 72; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description I build my bridges,
you burn them down.

I try to hold on,
you push me over the edge.

I need a reason to live,
you say we both will be better of dead.

I feel i´m worthless,
you say i´m nothing.

I load the gun,
you pull the trigger.

I wanna sleep with you forever
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clever-kyle [2005-10-31 08:22:58 +0000 UTC]

im familiar with the type of relationship you indicate, and it sucks to be in that postition. (sucks being an understatement.)
The whole poem flows nearly perfectly, except for the one part "you say we both will be better off dead"...without throwing off your meter too bad, that could be we'll and work just a little bit easier in the head.
Another great job.

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