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I FINISHED SQUIRRELFLIGHT'S HOPE IN LESS THAN 24H ADASDS. I.LOVED.HER MORE THAN I DO???
I LOVE this scene. A trial to let cats enter Starclan? You bought me with this (even that, I'm even more confused about how Ashfur passed..).
A quick opinion:
-Bramble is more..stupid? than the original books?? Like, what the heck is wrong with you man.
-But Leafstar was..Idk, I used to hate her, but I loved here(? I started the ship LeafxSquirrelxMistyxSnowxevery female cat in the book
-Now, I know where Alder got his 'voice', to speak with his opinion. And I like that Mom and Son got it; Squirrel was amazing in all the book
-They contradict in every page or smth?? I got so angry reading a part (i don't remember exactly) but I know It was like 'but..heck, you said the opposite books early..'. As the same when Moth Wing (I think?) said about that they pick Lion, Jay and Dove for the prophecy. If I remember good, yes, it was for the ancients, but it was never clear who chosed those three. Lion's Roar, Jay's wing an Dove's wing born before Moth flight, so..they couldn't say that they chose it; it could easly said by Fallen Leaves if we start like this. (I know that I'm not explaining well, but..you know.)
-Really liked Spark and Lark; I used to dislike Spark when she became warrior, but now I have a new perspective when I read Lost stars again.
Hope you like it!
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I FINISHED SQUIRRELFLIGHT'S HOPE IN LESS THAN 24H ADASDS. I.LOVED.HER MORE THAN I DO???
I LOVE this scene. A trial to let cats enter Starclan? You bought me with this (even that, I'm even more confused about how Ashfur passed..).
A quick opinion:
-Bramble is more..stupid? than the original books?? Like, what the heck is wrong with you man.
-But Leafstar was..Idk, I used to hate her, but I loved here(? I started the ship LeafxSquirrelxMistyxSnowxevery female cat in the book
-Now, I know where Alder got his 'voice', to speak with his opinion. And I like that Mom and Son got it; Squirrel was amazing in all the book
-They contradict in every page or smth?? I got so angry reading a part (i don't remember exactly) but I know It was like 'but..heck, you said the opposite books early..'. As the same when Moth Wing (I think?) said about that they pick Lion, Jay and Dove for the prophecy. If I remember good, yes, it was for the ancients, but it was never clear who chosed those three. Lion's Roar, Jay's wing an Dove's wing born before Moth flight, so..they couldn't say that they chose it; it could easly said by Fallen Leaves if we start like this. (I know that I'm not explaining well, but..you know.)
-Really liked Spark and Lark; I used to dislike Spark when she became warrior, but now I have a new perspective when I read Lost stars again.
Hope you like it!
Art(C)me
Designs(C)me
Warriors(C)Erin
YCH: fireprinces20.deviantart.com/g…
Commissions