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Description Again, DA's title limit is incredibly stupendously awesome and totally shouldn't be changed. /s

Characters used: Sundown Meadow, Sugar Apple Tart, Ambrosia, and Cinnamon Spice

Big Mac x Sugar Belle (QPR) = Sundown Meadow and Sugar Apple Tart
Applejack x Caramel = Ambrosia and Cinnamon Spice

It was early Friday morning at Sweet Apple Acres. All was well.


...Until it wasn't.


Ambrosia and Cinnamon were out in the orchard getting an early start on the apples they needed to buck that day. Meanwhile Tart and Meadow were in the opposite side, yet they could still see the other two from afar. Ambrosia managed to speed through her portion of the orchard before anypony else could, so she decided to peek over to Tart and Meadow to see how they were doing. To Ambrosia's surprise, they weren't done with even one-fourth of their half, which shocked her because they're usually about the same speed as her and Cinnamon. 


Ambrosia walks up to Tart and Meadow. "Slower than usual, eh?"

Tart: "Quiet, you. It's like, 7 in the morning... Don't you yourself have apples to buck as well?"

Ambrosia: "Already finished 'em!" She says as she points across the orchard. As Tart and Meadow look over, Cinnamon bucks his last tree. Tart and Meadow's mouths widen in awe as they look across the orchard.


Cinnamon sees the others and runs up to them. "Did you guys sleep late last night?"

Tart: "*sigh* No..."

Meadow pokes Tart on the shoulder.

Tart: "Alright fine, a little..."

Meadow: "He slept at like 4 in the morning."

Tart: "Sunny!!" He says as Meadow laughs quietly.

Ambrosia: "Well why would'ya do that when you knew we got work in the mornin'?"

Meadow rolls her eyes playfully. "I tried telling him..."

Ambrosia: "Maybe if yer brother ain't spend so much time stayin' awake fer so long, y'all woulda been finished by now! Unlike me and Spice over there."

Tart: "Wh- are you tryna say y'all are better than us or something?!"

Ambrosia: "Ah dunno, maybe ah am, maybe ah'm not."

Cinnamon: "You guys should calm down a bit..."

Meadow: "Yeah Sugar, things are gettin' a bit-"


Before Meadow could finish her sentence, she was immediately shoved behind Sugar Apple Tart as he started shouting back at Ambrosia.

Tart: "Oh yeah?! Well then let's see who's really the best at apple bucking!"

Cinnamon/Meadow: "Guys..."

Ambrosia laughed gently. "Alright sugarcube, but just know yer wasting yer energy by even tryin', cuz we all know which pony would win!"

Cinnamon: "...None of y'all? Maybe just accept the fact that you guys are equals and we don't have to have this pointless fi-"

Ambrosia cut her off. "What they meant to say wuz that we all know ah'd be the winner!" She said as she pointed to herself.

Tart: "Oh it is ON!"


Tart ran with Meadow and Ambrosia ran with Cinnamon. Both went opposite directions to coordinate their strategies.



Was watching Pastel Night's videos lately (specifically "Apple Bucking Strategy" when I had this idea) and I realized i haven't drawn my SugarMac kids in a LONG time, especially Meadow... so i decided to rectify that 

Sorry if the story's a bit lackluster, I haven't really written stories in a while (especially dialogue) and I'm just... very lazy when it comes to writing them.

Also Ambrosia ABSOLUTELY inherited the southern accent that Applejack has. It's kinda hard to put it into word form but I think I did fine xD


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