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FluffytailPonies — Contest Entry: Lost Cause

Published: 2019-12-30 17:04:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 1473; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 4
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Description A contest entry for   Galaxy Guard's ending contest

Don't worry owed art is on the way this is a story I had in mind ever since June (I think) so I really wanted to tell it, so I might as well do it know for a chance to win something XD



Story: (Begins shortly after wake up call: www.deviantart.com/kindheart52… )

"No daddy wait, please, PLEASE don't go you can't leave me again!" Galaxy Guard shouted but it was a lost cause. Now he was truly gone.

As she lay on the cold cobblestone floor Galaxy pondered what it all really meant. For the longest time she felt like her actions were justified, like she was doing something for the greater good and for her father. But he was disappointed. Dissapointed in her and her actions... and so Galaxy broke down into tears. All the things she did, all the ponies she hurt, it was all for nothing, it meant nothing. Except now they all had reasons to hate her.

Suddenly, a voice freed her from her thoughts. It sounded so familiar, she was sure she heard it before. So Galaxy began to crawl towards the sound, for some reason she felt the need  to apologise, it didn't matter if the pony wasn't who she thought they were, for once in her entire life Galaxy was desperate to apologise. 

But it was cold and she was hungry, weak, and old. And her energy reserves were draining fast, she couldn't even stand. Galaxy crawled and crawled flapping her good wing out of instinct along the way. She wasn't a lost cause, she could do this, even if it meant nothing Galaxy would try. She had to. And after this she could maybe seek out more ponies she wronged to apologise to... she just had to keep crawling... just a little bit further.

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But she was too late. A garbage pony found her lifeless body at the top of the alley the next morning. No one came forth to identify her so she was buried as homeless pegasi mare.

But every year, on the day she died, somepony leaves flowers on her grave.
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