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Flurious — The Darkest Hour- Pg 1
Published: 2010-09-20 11:55:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 16733; Favourites: 184; Downloads: 70
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Next: [link]WOOHOO! Page numero UNO!
‘Bout time, riiiiight? 
Wonder what Spyro’s dream meant…?
And yes, this is the official first page. And like I said before, that craptastic prologue I did a while back is now being thrown into my scraps. You can go look at if you want. :] I don’t really need it anymore, as this page does a waaaaay better job that the first one did. LOL
Anyyyywayyyy, I apologize for any inconveniences while reading this. I originally had different text, but then I hated it, and ended up redoing it after I drew it. LOLoops.
I failed. Also, I don’t know if I should stick with this linearting/coloring style throughout the whole thing (you can see I experimented a bit). Does it look alright to you…or is there something else you thing I should do? 
I kinda loused it up here! LOLBTW Don’t ask me what “Tsuel” means. You’ll find out later in teh comic. X]
Pronunciations
Cinomrah – “Sin-NOM-rah”
Ec’Nelis – “Ec-Nell-is”
Tsuel – “Sool”
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Comments: 101
Wow, first page in and already it looks like a deep and mysterious plot is quickly unfolding.
The artwork looks excellent and I'm really lookinf forward to reading this with its unique and interesting plot.
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Awesome job! The shading is really good, I like how you drew their faces. They look so REAL!
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Nice comic! I love glowy chronicler Iggy!
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You are right, you somehow made a better comic style.
I like the way this is going, from the beginning you're already creating some suspense.
Umm, to your question I think the lines within the horns is unnecessary. Don't know, its up to you. And the third panel, Spyro looks like he has too thick of a neck. That was a critique, not an accusation.
Pfff, haha. That was sparks that fell off of Spyro's head isn't it? And, I can see Cynder's tail. That's good, Cynder adds to a comic.
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A LOT of lines I randomly scribble on my linearts are unnecessary. Haha! I don't know why I'm so obsessed with scribbles lately. And you're right about Spyro's neck. I really fail at dragon anatomy now...I'm outta shape. Haha. Haven't been drawing them enough. I'll try to draw him better in the next page!
Thanks!
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My scribbles are all over the place when I sketch. I need to actually erase them to see what I'm drawing.
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Spyro totally looks like a fat kid when he says 'What do you...'
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That's 'cause I fail. Epically.
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I wouldn't say that. It just made me laugh. You can draw better zen me!
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Cool...
thes is good work... ^.=.^
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It is about damn time! I can't wait for more!
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PFT! Well excuuuuuuuuuuuuuuse me!
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My god, your shading skillz are way beyond mine! Ô.ô
I like the last frame....Spyro's face makes me giggle
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This looks absolutely amazing! Love the colors and the font and everything! I'm so exited, a new comic to start reading
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I'm so excited to start drawing it! Haha! I'm gad you liked it!
Thanks!
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yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayaaaaay 
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Yes you can see Cynder's tail! I originally had Cynder's whole body but I failed and just did her tail. LOL!!!!
HAHA, Thanks!
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ooooohh yaaaaa
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wow! this looks awesome!!! i love the glowing affects! this will be good!
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so are you gonna continue it or do we have to wait antoher half year XD
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LOL! No, I plan to really buckle down on this now. :] The next page should be up pretty soon. The concept draft of the next page is already finished. I just got fix the dialogue.
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O.O yaya
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I really love your style in this comic. Also, those expressions in each panel.
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