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Alorpax [2012-04-12 16:21:24 +0000 UTC]

Much better than my first try on the reference I showed you, I agree with Pirill. I had a few problems with putting the circles completely right first and my positions we're very awkward! The thing you have to practice most on is the muzzle, as it's still just a little bit too curvy, push the muzzle and the head to the right a little bit, push in the hind legs and then position the flank a bit more down. Good try! I am proud of you!

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Pirill-Poveniy [2012-04-12 16:13:37 +0000 UTC]

My (assuming you're going for show accurate style): I'll consider everything in relation to the chest circle.

Back circle is the right size, but a bit too high, they should be pretty much horizontally touching (in the standing pose), so that the back line isn't quite so steep. The legs have the right length, but they seem to not end on the same plane (forelegs seems a bit elevated, if you see what I mean).

The head is also pretty much the right size, but it's a bit too far left, making it look like the pony is leaning/having a very long neck. Bring it back a bit, and keep in mind that the neck shape is something like this: ( ( - obviously having a much shallower angle.

Finally, the only thing you seem to have problems with is the muzzle shape and if you're going for show-accurate, I can only say try trace it from a screengrab or keep practicing until you get the shape. Right now it quite a bit too big. On the whole though, it came out pretty well, especially if you say you haven't used the three circle method before.

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