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flycatcher263 — Gate of starchaser Chapter 1
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Published: 2017-01-21 02:53:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1820; Favourites: 110; Downloads: 9
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This is the first time I've posted my manga on deviantart. The story is about an adventure of an upsetting girl and a stranger she met in her subconscious mind. Together, they will fight against an unknown monster on the verge of breaking out hiding in her unconsciousness. Hope you like it! Thank you so much for reading!!!Related content
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"Aldults".
Heh, still a great comic though. Really nice.
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I really liked this. It is so deep, i could relate to it in several levels .
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I really like it
Only, there are a lot of mistakes with your English, which interrupts the flow of the reading... do you need someone to check it for you?
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Thats so Smexy
By the way smexy means that someone is Smart and Sexy ... so SMEXY ... you are Smexy XD
You really did quite the good job , so i have to thank you for sharing this with us
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It's amazing
The story and the art are both just woh ! Can't wait to see the rest !
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You draw the telescope with a very nicely rendered 90-degree eyepice but they look like this when actually used: 10minuteastronomy.files.wordpr…
What you have drawn is her mashing her eye against the side of the eyepice which looks pretty silly to anyone that has some experience with telescopes. The poses works for straight eyepices though, like shown in this picture al-paslow.smugmug.com/keyword/…
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thi is stunning! The story is so creative and cool, I love the concept! I can't wait for more. Also when it is all finished it would be really great if you could make it into a book so I can buy it.
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Holy cow. All those details and shading and DETAILS per panel. @ w @ It's like each panel can be framed. Looking forward to more of this!
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I love love love love looooveee iiiit!!!! Your artwork is so amazing!
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I'm always amazed by amount of details you put into your drawings ;u; The story is interesting and original. I'm happy you posted it here and I'm looking foroward to see next chapter. You're great artist! I really love your style of drawing. Keep up good work! <3
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this is AMAZING!!! I love all the detail, effort and the story
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I'm really happy you finally uploaded it! Love it so much!! The story is really nice and the artwork is just beyond amazing *-*
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It's so much beautiful Looking forward for next chapter *U!
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