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Published: 2005-11-04 23:44:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 59; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description Far away nothing stays the same
And when you turn back
you’re on your own
But never mind that,
just look ahead
This new day
tugging at your mind
is not yet spoken for
So grasp it within your
palm
And hold it there
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Comments: 1

mildeccentricity [2005-11-09 12:36:47 +0000 UTC]

Interesting topic, certainly portrayed well. I really like the ideas going here.
One thing though, it is kinda lacking in the 'flow' department. It didn't feel like a poem, I can only describe it as subtitles to a foreign film.
Ack, well, I hope that made sense.

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