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Published: 2003-04-21 22:34:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 333; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 19
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Love HurtsThe one you love will eventually hurt you
It won\'t sink in at first,
But when it does:
It will feel like your heart explodes,
It will make you wonder why,
It will make you want to still be their friend,
But they say no
It will make you have such an intense hatred for the one you loved,
It will be so intense it make you shake
You won\'t know what to do
You are on a tightrope,
Either you have made a safety net for yourself by meeting other girls or guys, or
There in no net
When you fall,
Will you land in the net, or
Will you hit the pavement
Slipping off the net,
Going to hit the pavement
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Comments: 7
Effamay [2007-04-07 22:22:52 +0000 UTC]
I'm not sure if this is pessimistic... or just being honest. But either way, its really well written
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sexc-blonde-angel [2006-10-28 08:54:53 +0000 UTC]
all i can say is wow..... i relate 100%
pls check out my literature and comment on it
anyone...
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c3ph31d [2003-05-15 22:34:06 +0000 UTC]
wow.. heartfelt. it certainly got a response. i think your writing is definitely thought-provoking and very real.
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wolvenblack [2003-04-22 01:09:00 +0000 UTC]
Nevermind. Think what you want. You disgust me now.
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wolvenblack [2003-04-22 01:08:20 +0000 UTC]
*growls* You just don't FUCKING UNDERSTAND. Think OUTSIDE OF THE BOX. And don't send me notes or comment on me or I'll report you.
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fragdude2k [2003-04-22 00:18:27 +0000 UTC]
I don't hate her, but I think it might come to that. I am more, disappointed that she couldn't handle it or work it out.
-Tim Ballas
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unheard-voice [2003-04-21 22:39:46 +0000 UTC]
this was very well written, keep it up. most of it i can relate to, but i cant hate anyone. hope you feel better. dont stop writting.
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