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fragilefacade — Leave Me To Decay
Published: 2003-06-24 19:55:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 110; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Decaying corpse upon this ground.The echoes slow,
Decrease the sound.
My crimson wet begins to fall.
My breathing slows.
I lose it all.
The bullets twitch within my chest.
My heart is weak.
I choose to rest.
The stabs behind forever sting.
The love denied.
You never bring.
So breath by breath, my life is gone.
Your laugh will haunt.
You\'ve won your con.
And as you turn your back and hide.
I say goodbye.
I cry inside.
(c) Sylwia Wielgosz.
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Comments: 4
You know i started watching you because i found a commonality between your work and mine because you are the first person that i have ever seen that equivocates love in such a away. You havent disappointed me in the least. I like this piece, i like the rythym, i like the stanza breaks and the verse adjusts and i love the whole tempermant of the poem itself , The theme and emotional response are very vivid and get across the panorama of emotional disarray that i just love to see in such works. Great piece
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Wow! This kicks ASS dude! This is an instant fav alright! My fav line is : No words, just actions! So i will act the rite way and ill add it to my favs coz i need this man!
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cute piece, i like the way u turn the first 2 lines of each stanza into one long one. welcome to DA, i am sure u will have a great experience here
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thats it.. i'm mad!! why can't i write like this?!?!?? grr.. blast you!! just kidding. but really you are amazing and i am soo glad you came to DA because you are a freaking genius! so yay for you! and this poem.. heck with the last 3 lines! the whole thing is amazing. but yeah.. "i cry inside" ahh.. what an intensely simple line but soo powerful! way to go!!
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