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Friendlyfoxpal β Borrowertale pt 11 (discontinued)
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I guess if you want to suggest it to them. And as long as they credit.
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charaΒ is so cute what happen to them or is that spoilers?
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Gooddd, these are adorable. I'm not even really a fan of Undertale, but this is so freaking cute~
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Daaaw hehe oh thank you! >w<
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It's so sweet and somewhat awesome in a way on just how quick Sans managed to catch Frisk safely when she lost her grip on the couch, albeit it does make sense seeing how she was in danger just there. Guess her bag still isn't dry since Frisk didn't make use of it like Sans pointed out in a way. Awww though they're both so concerned for her in the last panel, and looks like Frisk is getting rather agitated and scared again in that panel additionally, so hoo boy... That last panel is a great cliffhanger too like the last page cliffhanger was, it's suspenseful and makes me especially look forward to what the next part will have.
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Awww why thank you. I'm so glad that you liked it. And i'm quite satisfied with the direction i chose for this to go. But yeah now we'll have to see what will happen next from Frisk and the skelebros. I'll have to explore my options and figure out the best route. Figure out how Frisk is going to feel and react and how Sans and his bro will react as well.
And as for Sans being quick, i felt like since the time Frisk ran and smacked into the trash can pretty roughly Sans still feels pretty bad, maybe guilty about that maybe? And the idea of having her fall...and a drop like that would be more serious too then earning just a sore bump on the head i would think. I think Sans would hate himself if he let her fall without doing anything.
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No problem, I definitely loved this one! : D Looking forward to that next part as well, hope the ideas come soon. Yeah, that makes sense, I think of how somewhat awesome it is from how quick he was, is how it looks like that he literally leaped on the couch to catch her and still managed to catch her carefully. It doesn't seem like he accidentally hurt her or anything when he got her. Yeah, just like he said that was quite a drop for someone like her. Good on Sans though he's really looking out for his new tiny friend.
Oh, I was wondering, do you have an interpretation of what you think Sans' & Papyrus' voices sound like? Sorry, it's sort of easier to know what tone a character has in a comic when they're speaking if I have an idea what the artist believes a character's voice sounds like. XD
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Daaaw thank you!
And i like your Sans icon. And he has horns? I'm assuming that's from an Au. X3
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I'm loving the giant's thing!
and yeah he's from my au!
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Hehe thank you again! Making them giants, or Frisk simply small is fun.
And oh cool!
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Welp i do have a thing for giants or small humans.
as for my au,if ya wanna know more
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oh why thank you i'll check it out. ^^
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Thanks! That'd be nice of you!
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Had a quick read, that sounds interesting that he carries the multiverse and all that. ^^
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Thanks put a looooot of thiught into this!
doing a comic atm too
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Are yeah? Coolness! ^^
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Dunno if I'm determined enough to finish it tho...i'm not confident enough
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Ahh thank you!Β
Currently doing a comic too ^^
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I was looking forward to this one, some tension with fluff alongside it love it so cute to see Frisk on Sans' hand too! The hand that got Chara looks kinda human-like. That poor smol though XC Frisk has had some trying times for sure. Poor Chara as well. I love their expressions here, especially Sans' expression at the start after Frisk's memory of Chara ends. Also the part where Frisk is climbing down the couch before she fell, the part when she made a waving gesture of sorts was that her quietly trying to say to Sans that she'll be OK?
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Yes tension with fluff sounded like a good recipe to me for this part. >w<
And yeah i really loved making all the little expressions, gestures and everything in this. And i wanted to add some more Chara. Don't really have any plans yet though on who caught her or what happened to Chara after that. Plus that memory was part of Frisk's so that could be the last time Frisk saw Chara for a long while now.
Anyways i guess it's pretty clear that i'm enjoying making Frisk a silentish protagonist huh? X3 Silentish...because she still can make noises. I almost thought i could have had Frisk climb down further before she had trouble and fell. But with all these emotional, and stressful things happening for her lately as well, and her memories that i felt like it made sense to have it happen sooner.
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It really does work very well here in this part.
They do seem really well detailed. I get what you mean, poor lil Frisky though. Making her a silentish protag is a great choice, especially since Sans here has took note on how she hasn't spoken much. Oh yes things may look like Frisk sort of relaxed between them right now, well until around the end of the page but a lot of thoughts have been going through her mind so I understand what you mean about making her fall happen a little sooner.
Anyways this is looking good as usual can't wait for the next page!
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Awww hehe thank you for the comment. Glad you think making Frisk a silent protag was a good choice.
And i'm looking forward to the next page too. Once i figure out what direction i should go. Kind of struggling past a writers block...comic block for it.
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Frisk being a silentish protag is a good choice for sure, it also means that if she decides to speak such as possibly telling the bros her name it'll be a important moment for sure.
Oh no! XC Cursed comic block, are you having a hard time deciding which direction for the next page's beginning or a direction that's somewhere in the middle of the next page?
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Hmmm...i guess it's a little combination of both issues of my block. Don't really know where to take it all yet, it's always the hard part. >.<
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Oh no that sounds like a utter pain to deal with XC. Well this cliffhanger here does look like it's going to something extremely tense as Frisk does seem pretty scared again at the end of the page and may freak out. And with three different character reactions well I guess four if AD is still part of it though he seems to just be observing things now, you needing to consider so it all does seem like a challenge to decide upon.
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Poor Frisk. She must have seen some things...
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Yeah she's been through some things. Poor kid...
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this gave me butterflies because frisk fell XD
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Awwwwwww yay! More Borrowertale! And it just got interesting with Chara!
so Chara was kidnapped by another giant monster (my guess, any of the three Dreemurrs but mainly Asriel because he was the one to find Chara in the game), makes sense why Frisk so took what Chara said seriously....
but the comic's really well done as usual, especially the brother's facial expressions when frisk slipped and fell and sans caught her! They really bring out their worry, fear and concern out through them and it really shows! I also like how you draw Sans' hand, making frisk seem more tiny and helpless but it being a safe place for them, plus the detail on it is simple like your style but is detailed enough to separate it from a normal fleshy hand.
and I just love when papyrus went: "NYEH!", really matches his personality!
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Hehehe yep! More Borrowertale finally! 
And yeah i felt like adding another flashback with Chara. And who knows what happened to her. Not even i know at the moment. Since i don't really plan too far ahead i'm just playing this by ear.
And why thank you! Drawing the expressions and everything in this was fun to make. ^w^ I'm glad i made another enjoyable page for you guys.
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yep, it kinda makes you feel slightly sorry for frisk losing their only friend to the giants, despite how mean and bossy she was...
and ok, so it's like a free path storyline, nice! I like those kinds of stories, makes it less predictable!
you're welcome! And that's very good!
^w^
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Tiny Frisk is so cute in Sans's hands! Did they mean to fall from the couch?
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Hmm i tried to make it look like she was trying to get down by herself. But fell instead. Don't know if i got that across in this. I'm hoping i did.
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Got it. Was that supposed to be a memory of Chara?
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the first part yeah.
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Papyrus needs to learn to whisper, and Sans needs to be more careful!
Hmmm.... Sans is a font and Papyrus is an ancient type of paper. No wonder their brothers! I wonder what the game developers were trying to say?
Now for a stupid pun: Toby (Friendly) Fox Pal
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Actually, Papyrus is also the name of a font.
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Ooooooo... Geez Frisk, why do ya put yourself in these situations?
Great to see another part to this! And FINALLY we get another dose of GT interaction!
Can't wait for the next installment!
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Yep hehe i wanted to increase the Gt interaction in this part. And i'm happy you like it. >w<
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This is so cute!! It's perfect!!!
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Don't do what? >w>
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Scare the scoopies!
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