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Description EDITDECISION I'm enjoying reading these funny comments XD;; I decided I can't draw nipples. It's too much pressure on me. I'm embarrass as hell! But I tallied the votes, and nipples does win...but its too much for me to handle for this piece. So maybe next time I'll do that for something else (like a BL pic or something). And why are people fav-ing this pic and even a print request? It's not even a complete artwork........XD

EDITAGAIN Okay I already made quite a few changes esp on A..which I'm not showing haha..
But thanks to everyone's critique!! It helped a lot. I'm still contemplating the nipple idea haha.

OLD Should I add nipple? I never really drew them...not even in my figure drawing classes. *so shy*

Oh man abs are hard.........no wonder i don't do it often T_T;; This summer I'm just going to practice drawing lots of nude haha.
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Comments: 200

NarutoMaki [2007-05-17 19:53:27 +0000 UTC]

LOL. This made my day. <3.

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Takashi2000 [2007-05-17 19:38:12 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thats really good. You know the male figure pretty well.
I do think you should add nipples ^___^ I get that feeling like something is missing without them, because the rest is pretty realistically done.

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Kunrinnotero [2007-05-17 18:00:46 +0000 UTC]

The second one makes me swoon ^3^

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KunyueArt [2007-05-17 17:22:17 +0000 UTC]

You could make a few tests!I beleve in you! U_U
But man *-* Thee alll sooo sexy! X__X *steel one for herself*
>D Muahaha!

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rouko In reply to ??? [2007-05-17 15:52:58 +0000 UTC]

My vote is for the nipple, I think they are very hard to get right. You did a great job on the abs and drawing more nudes is something I should practice on this summer too. Goodluck to you!

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lilAURONgirl In reply to ??? [2007-05-17 15:39:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow these look great! Go ahead and draw the nipples. I was a little embarassed too at first, but, believe me, it's something you have to get used to. The first time is extremely awkward, but it will make the atatomy more realistic....though.....I don't really understand why men have nipples in the first place.....

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gem2niki In reply to lilAURONgirl [2007-05-17 19:56:33 +0000 UTC]

haha i was adding them on and erased them cuz it was sooo awkward. ikes!!

As for my men have nipples, because genetically, in our first few stags of being born, we were both sexes XD just only one sex traits develop further while the other recedes. XD;;

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lilAURONgirl In reply to gem2niki [2007-05-17 20:37:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh....wow, I didn't actually think that mystery had an explanation. Well, gee, thanks. Learn somethin' new every day!

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Senenga In reply to ??? [2007-05-17 15:04:39 +0000 UTC]

Man! Damn, and which one is the best? A, B or C?
I think that: A.
No.
I'm not sure.
Maybe: B.
So...
I'm looking again...
I think that...
Um.
C?
Yes.
No.
Yesno.
Noyes.
Noyesnoyesyesnoyesno!
ABCBCAABCCBA?!

OMG!

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unknown-chibi [2007-05-17 15:00:33 +0000 UTC]

No nipple ><

And I like B..... -drools-

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sharyamato [2007-05-17 14:48:42 +0000 UTC]

I say "No" on nipples. I think it would distract.

Very nice anatomy *_* *tempted to commision you again*

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tothineownselfbetrue [2007-05-17 14:31:49 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry I never drew nipples in my life class either! lol

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gem2niki In reply to tothineownselfbetrue [2007-05-17 19:57:54 +0000 UTC]

it's funny how some people emphasize it a lot in their drawings...while I just ignore it completely XD;;

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tothineownselfbetrue In reply to gem2niki [2007-05-18 02:06:39 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I'm not opposed to drawing nipples or genitalia but I just go there last usually, and a teacher who was not a life teacher asked me in my panel is the male models wore "sacks". LOL

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Morbidgoat [2007-05-17 14:05:26 +0000 UTC]

Nipples are needed! XD Nipples are always needed...

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KonekoD [2007-05-17 13:51:29 +0000 UTC]

I'd say B and C are the most realistic.

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ZeppTokyoASK [2007-05-17 13:40:56 +0000 UTC]

I think you should, it looks best that way. But that is your idea.
Looks hot.

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Kashatan In reply to ??? [2007-05-17 13:39:15 +0000 UTC]

*drools*
sorry, no comment, must clean up after myself

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Steorra-Moonstar [2007-05-17 12:52:53 +0000 UTC]

nooo, don't fuel my girlish fantasies any more than they should be fuuuueled... xD

can't wait to see what this evolves into~!

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PyrenaFay In reply to ??? [2007-05-17 12:48:07 +0000 UTC]

yay Abs **drools** i think they look good. yes yes

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ippus [2007-05-17 12:28:36 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure about nipples, I knwo for a fact everytime people draw them, I can't look at anythign BUT the dark specs on their abs.
It's like...it sucks my brain everytime 8'D

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gem2niki In reply to ippus [2007-05-17 20:00:18 +0000 UTC]

ROFL. well the overall pic will have like 4 paris of nipples then D: hahaa...but there's more than just the abs ahhaa. (i just cropped the rest out)

Have you drawn any ippy? XD

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ippus In reply to gem2niki [2007-05-18 06:01:57 +0000 UTC]

No XD
Actually I've never coloured abs either XD I tried sketching and tones on oekaki once but otherwise male anatomy is like german to me 8D

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Black-Heart1 [2007-05-17 12:18:23 +0000 UTC]

Well Done You really did well on your bodys. Keep it up.

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kusuri [2007-05-17 11:53:42 +0000 UTC]

It is very nice already.I don't think they need nipples,but if want them to,go for it!

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ShadesOfDestiny [2007-05-17 11:46:24 +0000 UTC]

Personally, I think nipples are a must.

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shaun-rules-4eva [2007-05-17 11:45:10 +0000 UTC]

Wish I had abs like those

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Ruby-Moon507 In reply to ??? [2007-05-17 11:30:41 +0000 UTC]

I really like how youve used shadow instead of drawing lines to define their abs, too many people do that and it makes it look really amaturish. Some people even go so far as to give characters things that look nowhere near ab-like but they insist they are. These look very real and very... touchable NICE!

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way2strange [2007-05-17 10:46:34 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could help you, but I don't really see anything wrong. Then again I haven't taken any human anatomy classes yet. I don't think they even offer it at my schoolllll..... bwaaaahhhh.

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Pericles [2007-05-17 10:19:12 +0000 UTC]

Awww... ABS!!! Don't we just looooove them 'cause they're hot!?

And yes... ADD Nipples... believe it or not, men have them too and they can give a lot of pleasure during ... you know... sex...

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gem2niki In reply to Pericles [2007-05-17 20:23:21 +0000 UTC]

ROFL ROFL.............*dies*

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Sakairu In reply to ??? [2007-05-17 09:40:50 +0000 UTC]

Well, I can't call myself an an expert concerning the ab shading, but I'll try to help. xD;;

I think B could use a bit more shadow under/near the armpit. And if A is the torso of a young boy, I'd suggest making the.. eh.. breasts less defined - I think that can be archieved by having the breasts cast less hard shadows. C looks fine to me!

I'd say yes to the nipples, because it's just more natural. : D I'm not bothered by the lack of it, though. In coloured drawings, I'd suggest not defining the nipples too much with lines if you don't want them to attract too much attention. Use colours.

Err, though you might be surprised at how many people actually comment about nipples when they see them, haha, e.g.: "Nippies! Teehee!", even though they're natural things. xD

I haven't looked up proper reference pics myself, but from what I've observed and applied to my own drawings: nipples should be placed low off-center of each breast. Ah, it probably varies per person, so I'm not entirely sure. ^^ ;; I've never had any lifedrawing classes. In any case, don't place nipples too close to eachother and try to pay attention to the size of the nipple - not too big and not too small either, but I guess that's up to your preference. xD;; I'm sure looking up nipple references will help, haha.

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gem2niki In reply to Sakairu [2007-05-17 10:14:26 +0000 UTC]

"Nippies! Teehee!"

ROFL. Hahaa...yea i think that would be a lot of people reaction + mine.

Thanks.

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ramen-shop In reply to ??? [2007-05-17 09:22:48 +0000 UTC]

omg your "artist comment" has been the funniest one i've read since i've been on. and no...i think adding nipples wld be pretty weird haha. but other than that the bodies look great!

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Nolita-San In reply to ??? [2007-05-17 08:36:54 +0000 UTC]

oh and i dont think nipple is necessary i dont ever draw them i think it look fine how it is.

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Nolita-San [2007-05-17 08:36:13 +0000 UTC]

omgi love ittttt
very nice very niceeee *drool*
its very good the lighting is perfect , no let me rephrase that.
everything is perfect

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kidokaproject In reply to ??? [2007-05-17 07:54:44 +0000 UTC]

these pics look awesome!
can't wait to see the finished result
and yea... i guess you should add a little nipple ^^"
softly.. not that defined though DX

say btw, you have your table for fanime yet? : D
which # table are you at

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gem2niki In reply to kidokaproject [2007-05-17 08:10:44 +0000 UTC]

It'll be on sale for Fanime! XD

Urgh...I still have no clue XD;;; My boss told me it'll be somewhere in the middle...Do you have the seating chart D?

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kidokaproject In reply to gem2niki [2007-05-17 09:41:55 +0000 UTC]

yea, i do. should i send it over to you to see?

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gem2niki In reply to kidokaproject [2007-05-17 10:12:43 +0000 UTC]

please do ^^ gem2niki @ hotmail

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kidokaproject In reply to gem2niki [2007-05-17 11:53:11 +0000 UTC]

*is done* xD
what are you doing up at 3:12 am

gyah, what am i doing up at 4:52 am =_= there goes my sleep for the night

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gem2niki In reply to kidokaproject [2007-05-17 20:01:19 +0000 UTC]

fanime is coming up and i have 0 new prints finished. need to finish this one soon and move on XD;;;

5 am? you're crazy.

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kidokaproject In reply to gem2niki [2007-05-17 20:32:27 +0000 UTC]

lol xD 8 more days! gosh, now i'm excited to see what you're gonna have cuz this WIP just looke so awesome XD
hmm, ~cika and I are sharing a table x ) I'll be sure to visit yours

xDD... i'm afraid i can't wake up if i go to sleep at this time. hahah, so i went to my 9 oclock class w/o sleep. turns out professor doesn't show up so i go back to my room and fall asleep and i just woke up xDDD
TT___TT *runs to next class that i am slightly late for*

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foxlee [2007-05-17 07:49:46 +0000 UTC]

I think all your abs are brilliant, personally I wouldn't change a thing. I like them somewhat undefined, too - to my way of thinking, adding too much line definition for a shaded picture kills the mood, especially when it comes to musculature.

I'd leave the nipples off, if it were me - maybe it's all the anime, but I just like it without If you did want to add them, the right place would be low down and towards the outside (relative to pecs, I mean ). On A, for example, I'd put it in the place where the shadow cutting across the chest meets the shadow around the bottom of the pec. Does that make sense? ^_^;

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gem2niki In reply to foxlee [2007-05-17 08:07:23 +0000 UTC]

Yup, made sense ^^

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Haibra In reply to ??? [2007-05-17 07:48:41 +0000 UTC]

i like all of them .. by the way .. what tools u used in this one ?

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gem2niki In reply to Haibra [2007-05-17 08:10:01 +0000 UTC]

Painter ^^

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Haibra In reply to gem2niki [2007-05-18 06:26:55 +0000 UTC]

thank u .. <3

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nayuki-chan [2007-05-17 07:45:27 +0000 UTC]

they look good the way they are right now
i prob wouldn't advise with adding on a nipple.. tho i think guys nipples in general are pretty dark.. but it just feels wierd when i see it see it in a drawing/painting ;;

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Chibi-Ninjitsu [2007-05-17 06:49:17 +0000 UTC]

I think "C" is your best one, only add nipples under two conditions... 1) No milkdud nipples 2) Make sure they don't look cold enough to poke someone's eye out! o_< Oh yes, the definition is most prominent & eye catching in option "C" because unlike the other ones it doesn't look as blobby(?) I don't mean for that to sound bad...btw. But I seriously think the way you combined the soft and hard lighting in "C" is best!!~

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