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Despite the help they had of four Covenant defector ships, the UNSC was still loosing the battle against the powerful and religious Juggernaut.High Command grew tired of President Knight's favoritism towards the four Covenant defector ships and their leader, the Sangheili Pirate Shipmaster Telek 'Herosee. It was time to see really what they can do. It was time for HICOM to toss the seasoned Shipmaster into battle alongside other UNSC ships and make him earn his keep once and for all. That is until a whisper came back from Reach that the Covenant had found it...at last. Now Telek and his ships race against time to the planet Reach before all is lost...
Kinda an idea I had. But I've been meaning to do this image for a long time since I've seen one posted here as well.
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Ghostwalker2061 In reply to ??? [2010-07-23 04:20:33 +0000 UTC]
Sorry, there's only one person who has permission to use my characters because he is willing to work along side of me and follow my rules. Yes, I have rules when it comes to writing and if someone writes with my characters, or in my universe, they have to follow them.
Another reason was because when I first met him, I read his stories to even deem him worthy of messing around my characters because I'm highly protective of them. And even after that, when he started handling my characters I was co-writing with him so he could see how the character's personalities worked and how they would interact with his characters. And this was 4 years ago. Now, 4 years later, he has written his own stories using my characters on his own.
So, basically, unless you're willing to go through all of that, the answer is no.
Besides, Telek discovered the truth about the Halos in 2539. He did not officially defect until 2546, but he was under much investigation during that time. It took him 7 years because he was in basically deep denial of the whole thing.
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Wisky-08 In reply to Ghostwalker2061 [2010-07-23 04:40:42 +0000 UTC]
I had a feeling you say that.
Got a plan B story all planned out staying with a altered twist around the middle for the story.
As in battle there are more than one way things can go.
I will follow the orders Admiral.
Of course he may be getting his stars a lot earlier, and more than three by Halo.
I will follow the rules and well bend then were I can, of course the reason for this AU.
Well to be honest sir.
It started when I notice a simiple mistake you made.
No...its not the Arbiter name so you can relax, Admiral.
But as of Reach well there was this one thing, and its not the Spartans as someone in the gaming mess up at Halo Reach as I thought it would be a game of Halo: First Strike...
It doesn't really matter as what done is done but that's what I love it ether way.
And that's a fact jack.
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By the way it would have been nice for Herosee to tell them what happen to the UNSC Spirit of Fire or expand the rest of the untold story of the Spirit of Fire.
As after they Spirit of Fire disappeared some worries must be put to rest.
And all doubt must be rid of.
And the deed of the unsung heroes must be known.
But I can't blame you as stuff was added on after the fact.
It confuses you at times with Halo.
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Ghostwalker2061 In reply to Wisky-08 [2010-07-23 05:12:35 +0000 UTC]
I already thought of stories where Telek shows up during Harvest, just a Shipmaster wearing white armor instead of gold because he has yet to attain his Zealot rank. And also this would be prior to when he becomes the Shipmaster of his famous cloak-enabled ship. But however, he's showing some signs of future defection because even before he discovered the truth of Halo, he did not like the idea of the Human/Covenant War.
He could do some underhanded things with helping the Spirit of Fire, however, I tossed that out of the window later on.
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Wisky-08 In reply to Ghostwalker2061 [2010-07-23 05:31:27 +0000 UTC]
Well, Admiral.
I understand but still I do not like leaving good people to die.
I was hoping that someone in ONI would randomly go through the data as they had family or friends on that ship and the records could tell what really happen to which she did by blowing that Shield world and that fleet down to hell.
To be honest by the sounds of it just be a quickie, right now the UNSC can't spare any ships for the search well maybe ONI may take a little look around just something to know that she is out there among the stars is enough to give their love ones knew hope.
You know with Telek he gave humanity something that not even the Spartans could give humanity.
Real hope.
Even if hes a dunk, crazy lunatic who you may want to keep your ship keys away from him when he is intoxicated.
But hes a hell of a pilot ether way.
The reason we keep the keys away is we don't want him to make us look bad while he drunk at the helm.
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Ghostwalker2061 In reply to Wisky-08 [2010-07-23 07:03:11 +0000 UTC]
Well, if Telek ended up saving Reach, then the Great Western Dragon Lofwyr wouldn't understand the meaning of sacrifice. Because he actually owned the damned planet. Or have you not read Halo: Voi Assessment?
There is a good reason why I keep a lot of Bungie's ideas. A friend of mine once told me that like my Kiryuu Saga, my Halo Different stories are steadily becoming darker as they near the end. I like that idea. People dying, though tragic, makes for excellent plot devices and drama in stories.
Also, check out BDM's stories who coincide with mine.
[link]
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Wisky-08 In reply to Ghostwalker2061 [2010-07-23 15:59:57 +0000 UTC]
I read them all...trough the night two.
My favorite is this one.
[link]
"No, you idiot, that means we're gay!"-Fleet Master Telek, 2546
Almost died from laughter from reading that sir.
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Ghostwalker2061 In reply to Wisky-08 [2010-07-23 21:19:08 +0000 UTC]
Well, you should also check out my artwork.
And he did not write Parley and Betrayal. So, no you did not read his stories.
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Wisky-08 In reply to Ghostwalker2061 [2010-07-23 21:32:55 +0000 UTC]
Oh so there are more stories about the Admiral, Mister Knight, the Dragoons and I was hoping that Shri would hook up with...ah, Lofwyr they to made me think they had something going there but that's just me with crazy talk.
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Ghostwalker2061 In reply to Wisky-08 [2010-07-23 21:34:11 +0000 UTC]
Something tells me you didn't bother looking at the link I showed you.
Look at the link before you comment, please.
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Wisky-08 In reply to Ghostwalker2061 [2010-07-23 21:40:34 +0000 UTC]
I am I got to go through several like eight of BDM stores its going to take a while.
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Wisky-08 In reply to ??? [2010-07-22 01:54:02 +0000 UTC]
I just read your stories.
Above excellent job can't wait for this to see how our Elite Captain pirate will do.
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pshbling [2009-12-26 22:39:18 +0000 UTC]
Looks great, I would say many Spartans lost their lives that day but Spartans never die.
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jollywrecker92 In reply to ??? [2009-10-03 06:04:43 +0000 UTC]
Damn, this came out great. I seriously hope to read this sometime soon, I've been itching to read all of your Halo stories, I've polished off everything you have up already.
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cloneddragon [2009-09-29 15:20:49 +0000 UTC]
*drools at the amazing detail*
how much time do you spend on these projects? seems like your popping them out one every few days.
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BlueRavenfire [2009-09-28 21:47:01 +0000 UTC]
awesome work. nice detail on the ships and on the explosion on the planet.
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caboose11l2 [2009-09-28 16:12:02 +0000 UTC]
Hey do you mind if I use this pic on a plane I am making?... I wonder if it will work on the marathon or even the crusier. Huh maybe later. But do you mind?
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Ghostwalker2061 In reply to caboose11l2 [2009-09-28 21:40:47 +0000 UTC]
You want to plaster that image on a plane?
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caboose11l2 In reply to Ghostwalker2061 [2009-09-28 22:24:43 +0000 UTC]
No I am. I was just wondering if it was okay with you to use your photo.
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Ghostwalker2061 In reply to caboose11l2 [2009-09-28 22:38:54 +0000 UTC]
The only time I say it's okay to use something is when I indicate it that it is okay. Otherwise, assume it is not okay.
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caboose11l2 In reply to Ghostwalker2061 [2009-09-28 23:42:58 +0000 UTC]
...... Wow you make things to complicated I will just use someone else's art work.
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Ghostwalker2061 In reply to caboose11l2 [2009-09-29 00:13:40 +0000 UTC]
If I haven't said it's okay, then it isn't okay. So therefore, that means..."no". And why use someone else's artwork? It's better to make your own.
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caboose11l2 In reply to Ghostwalker2061 [2009-09-29 01:21:33 +0000 UTC]
... I told you that I can't plus I am better with other peoples. And yes I know what you said geez you don't have to sound like a broken record. I can't draw I can design and make special effects and things of that nature but drawing is not my thing. Plus actually I have had people really want my to put their art work on different aircraft. I was trying to go out on a limb and even size it for the Marathon.
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Ghostwalker2061 In reply to caboose11l2 [2009-09-29 01:25:14 +0000 UTC]
I don't think that image would fit nor would it look good on a Marathon-class cruiser, so no. It's not a texture map.
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caboose11l2 In reply to Ghostwalker2061 [2009-09-29 01:28:12 +0000 UTC]
... Apperently you have not seen what I have put on that beast! lol Its actually quite comical. Since I can't manually alter it like I normally can it looks strange... But good.
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Ghostwalker2061 In reply to caboose11l2 [2009-09-29 01:48:23 +0000 UTC]
Fine, wrap that image around a Marathon cruiser. Just give me credit and make sure those viewers go and see the original image that I created as well.
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caboose11l2 In reply to Ghostwalker2061 [2009-09-29 01:58:35 +0000 UTC]
Ya no I tried. Actually I tried it with a few of yours! No luck. And plus no matter what I always give credit no matter what even for something as simple as a name. I might get it to work for the covenant carrier. But no promises.
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Ghostwalker2061 In reply to caboose11l2 [2009-09-29 02:04:23 +0000 UTC]
I told you, mine aren't texture maps, they're not meant to be used that way.
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caboose11l2 In reply to Ghostwalker2061 [2009-09-29 02:07:35 +0000 UTC]
Ya I tried it on the other one. No luck It looked good at first then I added the bottom... Its really strange. Usually I can get them to work. Have you ever heard of "HAPPY HALO DAYS"? I put that on the marathon once just for fun... it worked perfectly. But since I could not get the owner to respond I did not put it up.
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TheSearcher In reply to ??? [2009-09-28 05:25:56 +0000 UTC]
another masterpiece Chris, another one to add to the list of favorites. Nice job on the covie ships.
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The-Numb-Skull In reply to ??? [2009-09-28 04:40:34 +0000 UTC]
Ah, is this perhaps a preview of what's to come when Halo Reach drops next year? If so, then this is a great preview!
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Ghostwalker2061 In reply to The-Numb-Skull [2009-09-28 10:48:01 +0000 UTC]
Nope, this is my story.
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Ghostwalker2061 In reply to Bspacewiz2 [2009-09-28 03:16:29 +0000 UTC]
Ah, B, this is a surprise. Thanx.
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Ghostwalker2061 In reply to Bspacewiz2 [2009-09-28 03:27:46 +0000 UTC]
You didn't go see my "A Monument". It was dedicated to Gravemind. *sniff*
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Ring-127 [2009-09-28 02:27:25 +0000 UTC]
ho... how did you do this... you must teach me master, this is amazing.
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