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Published: 2012-08-08 02:08:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 73525; Favourites: 487; Downloads: 169
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The original introduction for Issue 1 really confused readers. So, I kinda just shorten it into one page. Hope it makes more sense, guys.(This means I gotta re-number Issue 1. GWAAAAH!)
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Im confused at one part.
If Heephis made Shadow. Why does he look like Celios?
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That's a good question, and it will be answered in the future. For now, I can't spoil anything.Β
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Well, I'm sure you'll mix something up. That is one hell of a plot hole I've been asking myself for a while. Good luck and as always we love your comics.
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So which god controlled what?
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If you don't know now, it will be explained in Issue 5.Β
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Β Q: HOw can they overcome something as powerful as sinΒ
A: cause their sonic HerosΒ
sorry sorry Just couldnt help myself
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so shadow, Sonic,and Siler are brothers in this comic???
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Soul bonded brothers, not birthed brothers. Read the rest, and you'll see what I mean.Β
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i read and I understand now
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Well well well.... I wonder who are these "simple souls" ?
Expect a lot of comment from me ! XD
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I look forward to reading 'em! ( your comments)
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Did each God give one thing each 
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They are technically not gods of one thing, they are all equally powerful, how ever they have just responsibilty for some sector of the universe. Heephis is Energy, Celios is Life, and Zielo is Control. You'd find out who is responsible for what eventually in Issue 5.Β
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I understand 
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Ohhhhhh I see sorry I miss red "They are technically not gods of one thing"Β 
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Hmm...'Then Sin was Born'...but Sin isn't born without an instigator; without someone who makes a mistake and brings evil into the world as a result of it. Wonder if it was one of the brothers...or someone CLOSE to the brothers themselves? Perhaps a friend of Zielo since Sin engulfed him the most? Very curios....Β
And, I agree with the last comment. How can you overcome SIN?Β
Hmm...I wonder if Shadow, Sonic, and Silver are representations of Heephis, Celios, and Zielo? Cause Zielo not only looks like Silver but I have a shaking suspicion that, from the cover of Issue 4 (the look in Silver's eyes to be exact), Zielo is going to do something to mentally affect Silver... Of course, I could be wrong given Issue 1 Page 22...Sonic may be the one to fall to Sin...Either way, this is so cool!!! This is my second favorite page besides Issue 1 Page 22!!!! And these are all amazing!Β
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"A monster isn't born, it is created through continual sin and the refusal over others to stand up to it." (Shaun Rogue Borealis)Β
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Actually, if you watch the trailer on YouTube, you'll see that sin originally came from the mortal race. Probably from their errors and jealousy (especially of immortal life, but that's just some backstory speculation).
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Well, thank you very much!Β
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It's funny that you mention that. TMOM's universe is more of a mythical legend, some parts of it are based off of Greek stories.Β
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"Heephis, Celios, and Zielo" seem to go along with other Greek gods Demeter, Helios, Themis, Hermes, Artemis, Hephaestus....
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Yeah, I'm not surprised. I really like Greek myths and legends, when it came to naming my gods, I wanted to give them names similar to Greek Gods and (sort of) Goddesses.
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How did you write this story?
Did you write down a general concept and flesh it out as you went along?
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With each Issue I basically write a script for it, then edit it as much as possible to make it as pleasing as possible. Sometimes when I'm working through an Issue though, I tend to add on things that weren't originally in the script. All in all, I try to avoid doing this story as it goes along. The more figured out my script is for my series, the more foreshadowing and epic twists I can pull.Β
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You should check this video out. It has 40 plot points for script writing.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=s2K6ZgywjBo
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Before I started TMOM, I actually watched a bunch of videos like this. They really help. Thanks!
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You're welcome. I too am using videos for developing my story.
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Why thank you, I aim to please!
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DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUN!!! The three souls would be the triple S ^^ and to be fair, the trio of gods really do look like them too
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Yup! And they look like them for a reason, which I'll reveal to my readers hopefully very soon.
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EH?! there's another person who goes by Blazorna? weird...
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No, that's Blazerona, aka Erin.
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OMG!!! I am loving it so much for just the first page! X3
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Awesome! I hope you enjoy the rest of the issues!
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I've just got to page two and I already think this comic's awesome.You are a wizard with words!
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I prefer "stupid genuis"
But hey, I'm glad you like it already, and such an early part of the issue! This is actually one of my personal favs in this issue--It straight up tells the reader, " Before you even continue, no, this isn't a normal fan comic."
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He,I agree,Hey I really like your avatar icon,it looks really funny.
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Thanks, I made it myself!
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What's a story without beginnings like this?
Awesome, by the way.
And could you thell me please which god is who?
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You're not suppose to know who is really who, but you can guess! You'll find out who is who in future.
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Ahhhhh ^.^ im tingling of excitment
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Yay! Glad you are excited!
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