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GoblinGrimm1 — Pretty Bird and Arrow Head

Published: 2013-05-09 04:38:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1242; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 1
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Description Lol ok so I got it inked. I will add a target background in the near future but i have other projects to work on, so i am done obsessing over this one for now.
On 2 peices of 11 x 17 in Bristol board, penciled and inked by me.
Fan art of Black Canary and Green Arrow.
Characters are property of DC comics.
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Ehnder [2013-05-09 11:56:25 +0000 UTC]

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Your lines and shadowing are lovely! The folds and attention to detail are all very well done. Problem areas: Your perspective's off on the male, I know you meant for his arms to be foreshortened to add depth but they just comes off as stubby due to improper angles and arm posturing. Also, you put so much detail in the clothes and little things like the tears in the tights and the tendon definition in the hands etc., but leave detail out of the lady face that it makes it seem almost out of place amongst the rest of her. Mouth has great detailing but the rest of the face flops in comparison detail-wise.

Hope this helps some!

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