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Published: 2016-08-19 09:04:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 2044; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 116
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I hit the word limit and had to make it a download.I tried to make it smaller, but doing so cut so much that is butchered the story, so fuck that, it's a download so you get the whole thing.
I hope you like it.
So let me know what you think, be as honest as you feel you need to be, it's cool.
Thanks for reading. ^_^
A reader mentioned how they couldn’t remember certain details after reading so much…So I’ll put them here to be a refresher…this is of course my cannon view on things and may or may not be how Toby Fox envisioned them.
Lynsie is 5'8’’, a brunette with mid-back length hair that is in a ponytail tied with the faded red ribbon, pale white skin, she has hazel eyes that tend to look green most the time, and her outfits after becoming Toriel’s daughter all have the Delta Rune emblem on the chest.
Sans is 5'4''
Pap is 6'4''
Gaster before the CORE is about 5'10'', while after the CORE he's 7'0''
Grillby is about 6'0''
Napstablook is close around 5'0''
Mettaton is also around 5'0'', Mettaton EX is taller at 6'6'', and Mettaton NEO is a massive 7'2''
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he is, butt (hehe.. butt) Can he have a bigger part in the story?
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He's not that easy to make scenes for.
It doesn't help that we are entering the final chapters.
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Ahh Okay are you planning on making another story after this
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I have a poll up in my journals for if people want a sequel.
I think the choices were a direct sequel (which I might do as an epilog), a retelling from a AU, or leave it alone.
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Imagine retelling it from Gasters view
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From Gaster's view...I think that might be shorter than this one.
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Oh yeah ALOT shorter maybe 12 chapters if the chapters were 12-13 pages long
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yeah, and it would be full of science talk that others might not fully grasp.
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Mmmmmm maybe just dumb it down a few notches!
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YOU WANT ME TO DUMB MYSELF DOWN SO THAT LESSER MINDS UNDERSTAND THE VAST AMOUNTS OF INFORMATION I CAN DISCRIBE IN AN ALREADY SIMPLIFIED WAY?
Lynn: Gaster no...
I WILL NOT BE EDITED OR MODIFY MYSELF FOR OTHERS!!
Lynn: Sweety, calm down! You may need run before he goes on a rant with reasons why.
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JESUS HOW LONG DID THAT TAKE TO TYPE?
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Not long.
Oh! New chapter is out.
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I had my wisdoms out when I wrote that!
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I know mine need pulling.
All 4 are broken and jacked up.
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I HAD to have mine out and that comment was the aftermath
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hugz4me feel special!
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Hugs for days!
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Yay!! Off topic I love Asriel
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I love Flowey!
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I was frickin right at points such as this its goes plain stupid.
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I know.
And it counts symbols like this ♪♫, WINGDINGS, and the distortion as double characters, so 1 becomes 2.
I don't want to cut the story just to suit DA's rules.
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dude i think u forgot to add the story ... >.>
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No. It's here. You have to click the download on the side.
Apparently DeviantArt has a text character limit and the chapter hit that like crazy.
I did try to shorten some longer bits, but that cut half of chapter out, so I didn't do it.
Sorry if was weird.
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ahhh ok that makes more sense, also going great XD
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