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Shadows of the ForestSee now; a bar room, just like a thousand others from the Sea of Ice to the Southern Deserts. A low ceiling with heavy beams, stained black by two hundred years of wood and tobacco smoke. Battered tables, wheelbacked chairs and settles all of age darkened oak filled the floor. To the left a bar, backed by barrels of ale, beer and wine; pewter tankards hanging in a rack. Over the ancient fireplace opposite hung a stuffed stag's head which had seen better days, and on the walls old stage wagon timetables, a number of rusting swords and axes and several indifferent and flaking paintings. The light of the dying sun spilt golden through the leaded glass of the windows. In one of the recesses dozed the tavern's fat black and white patched cat. Somewhere a clock struck nine on a cracked bell. Smoke hung in the air like river mist on a frosty morning.
As he walked through the low doorway from the market place Colgrim looked around him, it was busier than usual for the time of day. He waved to Jotham, the landlord, a thickset, shaven-headed ex-pit-fighter in a leather apron who was pouring a jack of ale. Jotham nodded to the Sheriff Officer and handed the quart to Simeon, the letter writer, a thin-faced, grey haired man in a faded and stained jupon of cherry coloured broadcloth. Simeon wasn't drunk yet, but Colgrim would lay a gold to a copper he would be before the hour was up. Ah, yes, and there was Beitris, the harlot, in her red and orange silks, a goblet of wine in her hand, draping herself around a tall dark faced stranger in the robes of a mage. Colgrim was willing to bet the stranger's black beard and hair were dyed to hide grey, he looked the vain type; the robe and rings were just too ornate for good quality. A low roar drew the lawman's attention to a group of scale-mailed Dwarves at a table, swallowing ale as if it were going out of fashion, cracking off-colour Elf jokes and playing dice. He wouldn't have any trouble with them unless somebody else started it, Colgrim knew Dwarves. Another table held a group of men in the faded green tunics of Foresters, all locals, all law abiding. Tillingast, the head Verderer, a self important chubby faced blonde, shouted a greeting and he blew her an insincere kiss, a memory of a drunken beltane tumble several years ago.
In the corner by the fire Tobias, the local gleeman, was strumming on his mandolin and singing in a brandy darkened voice, trying to make himself heard over the noise of the customers. The Sheriff Officer listened as he gestured to Gwynneth, one of the tavern wenches, to bring him a beer and sat down at an empty table, hitching up his broadsword.
The gleeman was half-way through his rendition of the Mistaken Suitor and Colgrim was beginning his second tankard when somebody tapped him on the shoulder. He looked round and saw Berdan, the Halfling peddler, usually a cheerful little chap but serious looking at that moment, perhaps even scared.
'Sergeant, Oi 'ates to bother yeou, but there is a Lady as wants a word. She does be in the parlour loike. Jotham told me to tell yeou.'
Intrigued, the Sheriff Officer took his tankard and wended his way to the bar parlour, a cheerful little room, used by visiting gentry and by merchants for private business. He wasn't sure what to expect; usually a noble with problems would go to his commander, the Under-Sheriff, Sir Valerey, if not the Sheriff herself, rather than a humble Sergeant like Colgrim.
He entered the bar parlour ducking through the low door and manoeuvring his sword so as not to bang it off the frame. He straightened and looked at the figure awaiting him. The first thing he saw was her robe, an unusual one he'd never seen the like of, it was the blue of a summer sky, hooded, trimmed with black and girdled with scarlet; almost he would have said it was the robe of an Archmage, but it wasn't. The second thing was her face, under a fringe of light brown hair it was finely boned with the slightly slanted green eyes of a Half-Elf. The full lips were set in an expression of habitual severity. Thirdly her figure, she stood perhaps five and a half feet tall and had the compact build of a warrior, which accorded well with the fact that she was wearing a sword on her left hip, a sword with a plain functional crosshilt, the more expensive version of his own. She spoke, a strange voice, it sounded as though she was not used to speaking.
'Sergeant Colgrim Etheridge, I presume. I am Felice Ui'Sihane. I require your assistance.'
The lawman was surprised, one didn't expect to find a legend here in Cloyne Bridge. The Blue Witch, no less, Rector of a famous school for Mages and Healers, celebrated bandit killer. Well, it explained the odd robe at least.
'Whatever I can do to aid you, Worshipful Lady, that I shall do,' he made her his best bow, 'what seems to be the problem?'
The Blue Witch seemed to meditate for a moment before answering, so that it was clear to Colgrim he was not going to be told any more than she thought he should hear.
'Are you aware that in the Forest some leagues to the North of Cloyne Bridge lie the ruins of the College of Oghma?'
'The ruins are fairly well known, Worshipful lady, but uhm... avoided by the locals. Adventurers go there sometimes, never heard of any making a profit from it. The Elves may frequent the place, I wouldn't know about that nor wouldn't to. It's no further than their city than from us though. Can't say I knew it was a school.'
'Ah... well a Scholia it was, some centuries since and as such it held a library and a scriptorium - no printing presses in those days. Well, some weeks ago a party set out for the ruins from Castle Gabhran. They passed through the Elven Kingdom and they... disappeared. From my inquiries here it would appear they haven't arrived. Therefore I require you as the Sheriff Officer to form a posse comitatus to search the Forest and the ruins.'
'Worshipful Lady, surely magic would be more useful in locating...'
'The Scholia is in an area in which magic does not operate. What is called a dead magic zone, Sergeant. And even were it not, the Forest has so many magic-users and magical creatures in it that divination becomes, shall we say, unreliable. No, a physical search is the only possibility. You have a week to form your posse Sergeant, by then the rest of my own party will be here and you will join us.'
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'I don't like the sound of this,' said Merci Tillingast the next morning. 'What were a bunch of Gabhran soldiers doing this side the border? And...'
Colgrim cut in. 'We don't know they were soldiers.'
'We don't know they weren't, at any event! And as I was about to say, why would the Blue Witch be looking for them? She doesn't live in the Duchy of Gabhran. And why didn't she go to the Sheriff? That'd be the normal thing or the Lord High Verderer.'
Dean Whately, the local sorcerer, spoke, turning from the window his bearded face serious, 'the Blue Witch's school is in Travenhurst County and Maeve of Gabhran is also Countess of Travenhurst, so she's tributary to the Duchess. I would suggest she didn't go to the high-ups exactly because of the political dimension. Sergeant Etheridge has to comply, they might be obliged not to.'
'All right' said the Verderer 'I get your point but I don't like the idea of going anywhere near the ruins. And what about those bloody Elves? They ain't gonna want us too close to their bloody borders and they tend to warn you off with arrows.'
'That's why you're coming, you and your Foresters. Haven't you always said that you are the match for any Elf in woodcraft, Merci?' remarked Colgrim.
'Hmf!'
The three bent to the maps on the table, in the Sergeant's office at the town gaol.
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to be continued...
Comments: 31
MrForgeProngs [2004-04-14 05:24:13 +0000 UTC]
*looks up* that is really powerful! i love it!
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kabandra [2003-10-01 21:52:16 +0000 UTC]
Howdi-
Just now endeavoring to read. Love the first part. Very nice attention to detail.
Question:
Are the elves going to be more Tolkienish.. by which I mean large.. or classically short?
Esen Kal~
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darkpsiozzy [2003-01-18 21:50:17 +0000 UTC]
very incredible beginning. Very good use of imagery and character descriptions, and the dialouge so far is great. I can sense s hint of Forgotten Realms in this story, which I like, so it should be interesting to see where you are going with this tale. You certainly have me hooked, and I will read more as time permits. One again, very great piece of work here, +fav.
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lordcrusan [2002-10-05 03:28:37 +0000 UTC]
HEY great story so far! have u ever consider making this a devback for easy download?
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dark-echo [2002-08-09 16:41:40 +0000 UTC]
Amazingly powerfull writing this. Really soothing and easy to read. Quite descriptive, yet leaves enough to the imagination.
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lmorningstar [2002-07-13 00:54:22 +0000 UTC]
A most intruiging beginning; it's definitely lived up to all the praise (that's saying something)!
I hope to read a few more chapters before my weekend ends. Great piece.
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merlin-tbd [2002-07-08 22:00:51 +0000 UTC]
absoloutly stunning what a read, a very well wrote peice i will definetly be reading the rest Stotty tells me they get longer hehe, which is great even more to this amazing tale
oh and a
to go with it ;P
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cruise [2002-07-05 14:16:34 +0000 UTC]
Much the same as everyone else. Very well written, some really nice details and touches that mark the story out. The setting isn't original, but that doesn't matter if the tale is well told.
If I was going to gripe about anything, it would be the speed with which we are thrown into the initial quest...time to settle in and learn the world would be nice.
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lorelaiv [2002-06-27 11:04:06 +0000 UTC]
Extremely intriguing!!i ll be checking the rest of it , to be sure!!! well deserved DD from what i can tell so far!!
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angelic-taint [2002-06-26 23:12:33 +0000 UTC]
omg why haven't i seen the fantasy section before .. i can't wait to read the rest of this!
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matrix7 [2002-06-26 21:12:18 +0000 UTC]
Loooooong.....but I like it! i always have loved stuff like this. This site is so friggin great. You get full stories all the way down to haikus in the same site!! great icon too for the submission, it really fits it
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fae13 [2002-06-26 19:13:01 +0000 UTC]
oh.. this is amazing..
i am completely enraptured by this..
Congrats on the DD... now i must go and read the others!
your work has made my morning ever sooo pleasant! thank you!!
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ajtrance [2002-06-26 17:59:42 +0000 UTC]
that has got to be one of the longest things I've read here on DA...like the cover pic
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kni [2002-06-26 13:53:42 +0000 UTC]
this is cool !
i don't usually read prose here on deviantart, but i like the idea of fantasy
reminds me of 'lord of the rings'
with the forest and all
looking forward to the rest
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seascape [2002-06-26 13:24:54 +0000 UTC]
Amazing... Why am I not amazed that you'd create something so intricately woven and inviting?
And many congrats on the DD. It's deserved beyond words.
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mortalpsyche [2002-06-23 17:43:12 +0000 UTC]
I haven't had this much fun since reading Coelho's 'The Alchemist'. I can't wait to read part two.
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sajsemegaloma [2002-06-22 22:59:09 +0000 UTC]
nice
EXTREMELY descriptive
i'm going to read #2 now, i'll tell you what i think when i'm done with the lot ...
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stotty [2002-06-20 16:22:25 +0000 UTC]
You conjure up some wonderful 'magical ' scenes with a truly awesome style. I can't wait for the rest, well done.
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whyrph [2002-06-18 22:35:04 +0000 UTC]
Nifty . . . cliche in more ways than one, but that is not always bad. I note from your calling Dean the local sorceror that this will be a high magic setting. Not my favorite type, but good nonetheless, and your great writing warrants a +fav Nice.
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cure-shot [2002-06-16 11:57:57 +0000 UTC]
awesomeness!!!!! in awesomeness!!! the female body is awesome like a forest!! they are same! cause u can loose yourself in both!!
**love this piece and the idea!! elves forever!
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eilidh [2002-06-15 16:01:07 +0000 UTC]
Since I am lucky enough to have heard the rest, I can only say it's coming up very nicely! I've been thoroughly enjoying it.
+favs; in Greek I'd say 'for the honour of arms'.
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