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I'm still alive and still thoroughly distracted.To be honest, I've lost interest in my TSD story for the time being, so I'm expanding a few of the characters into another universe and another story.
What I'm currently working on (and by working on I mean have finished one chapter about) is a much different setting than that of Mirembe's universe, and focused more on subjects that I have more personal experience in, such as spirituality, Diasporic cultural identity, racism, and inter-ethnic relations.
I'm still trying to come up with a proper name, but the story is centered around four main characters, Tchida being one of them. The city she lives in was founded by different nations based on African, Middle-eastern, Asiatic, and Mediterranean peoples. In the city, people highly value their cultural identity, so those with strong traditional connections are held in high regard. People like Tchida, however, who are descended from escaped prisoners and slaves of an enemy nation, have no recollection of where they came from or what culture they belong to.
So, in essence, Tchida's kind are part of a lower caste of people in the city. And despite the entire region being at war with a very "Eurocentric" superpower on the other side of the world, the united city itself has its own issues with prejudice and oppression of its own lower caste. One high-caste Minister is torn between dealing with the war at hand or turning his attention to his own city's problems.
Another main character, Asahn, is a soldier who just returned to the city after deployment. In his eagerness to keep fighting, he tries to leave the city to find an independent nation to ship him back out to the front lines, and Tchida goes with him to find out where her people came from once upon a time. They manage to befriend an obsolete android found in an ancient temple along the way, which calls itself Kel, and insists on being identified as an actual, conscious person, and feels a connection with Tchida due to their longing for an identity of their own, since the people who built it had long since vanished.
There's a lot more going on in the story, but I just realized I've gotten carried away with the description. I'm probably just going to use this post as a story reference at some point, so whatever.
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Comments: 48
Doctamagickfingaz [2015-06-17 21:08:04 +0000 UTC]
This reminds me of a character project I undertook myself, will have to find the motivation to return to it.
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pinchback [2014-10-09 00:54:12 +0000 UTC]
Cool design! The wardrobe design and colors do a good job of capturing an ethnic aesthetic with a bit of modern/future twist.
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Sanio [2014-04-16 12:51:41 +0000 UTC]
Your lines are so clear and simple! Do you have any tutorials how you draw these awesome drawings? Sorry if I'm bothering you but I can't stop looking at your drawings, they are really nice!
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neonUFO [2013-05-12 17:36:23 +0000 UTC]
She has a really gorgeous body type!
It's like a breath of fresh air to see common-bodied women pictured in art. (:
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YesImDeadpool [2012-09-10 17:55:32 +0000 UTC]
Sounds like today's Middle East.
In other words, a living hell.
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haodan In reply to YesImDeadpool [2012-09-11 01:32:29 +0000 UTC]
I've lived in Kuwait for a few years and it's really not bad at all. Even managed to visit Bahrain and Dubai.
Of course the warzones are bad, but not all of the Middle East is a warzone.
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YesImDeadpool In reply to haodan [2012-09-11 01:38:45 +0000 UTC]
Most of the Middle East is misogynist and fanatical at least from what I've seen.
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haodan In reply to YesImDeadpool [2012-09-11 01:53:43 +0000 UTC]
Although traditional customs can be a male-centric, most of the educated population are pleasant, open-minded people.
Hell, they're planning a self-sustaining city in the UAE that surpasses even modern western infrastructure. Sure, rural areas are gonna have their religious fanatics and such, but the majority of the Middle East is much more developed than most westerners give them credit for. It's just that we're always focusing on the negative.
It's kind of like how a lot of people assume Africa is a monolithic continent with only a few developed cities, when in actuality a lot of middle-class people in a lot of areas are living better than middle-class people in America.
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YesImDeadpool In reply to haodan [2012-09-11 12:55:49 +0000 UTC]
Well I'm having a great difficulty finding Middle Eastern people who aren't terrorists or Holocaust deniers.
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haodan In reply to YesImDeadpool [2012-09-11 15:43:06 +0000 UTC]
Um... The average Muslim/Middle Eastern person isn't a terrorist. In fact, most terrorist attacks on America specifically were made by white, American men. The average Middle Eastern person isn't a terrorist. That's really an ignorant assumption and also statistically impossible.
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YesImDeadpool In reply to haodan [2012-09-11 15:52:29 +0000 UTC]
I know it's not statistically possible, I've just heard more about the Arab terrorists than the Westboro Baptist Church.
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haodan In reply to YesImDeadpool [2012-09-11 16:00:49 +0000 UTC]
Maybe you should be more careful about what you're listening to?
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YesImDeadpool In reply to haodan [2012-09-11 16:41:41 +0000 UTC]
Yes, but it's very difficult.
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haodan In reply to YesImDeadpool [2012-09-11 17:29:24 +0000 UTC]
Not really. If a teenager can do it, I'm pretty sure you can.
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YesImDeadpool In reply to haodan [2012-09-11 17:34:07 +0000 UTC]
I was 10 years old when 9/11 happened, and heard about it the same year.
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haodan In reply to YesImDeadpool [2012-09-11 22:20:38 +0000 UTC]
I remember the day 9/11 happened, but I didn't let it convince me that all Middle Eastern people were terrorists when it's obviously not true. Most massacres and terrorist acts on US soil have been perpetrated by Americans. Does that mean all American people are terrorists?
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YesImDeadpool In reply to haodan [2012-09-11 22:53:19 +0000 UTC]
No. It's just more personal for me because my uncle was there during Munich. Who perpetrated Munich? Palestinians.
Learning tolerance is the hardest thing I've had to learn my whole life.
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haodan In reply to YesImDeadpool [2012-09-12 04:05:48 +0000 UTC]
I've known a Pakistani girl whose father was killed by American soldiers. He wasn't part of any militia or terrorist force. Yet she didn't hate all Americans and ended up going to the same school as me. She was my best friend in middle school.
She didn't call Americans terrorists with no value for human life.
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YesImDeadpool In reply to haodan [2012-09-12 12:06:45 +0000 UTC]
I wish I was more like her then in that way.
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BrandonScottPilcher In reply to YesImDeadpool [2012-09-11 17:05:30 +0000 UTC]
What on Earth are you listening to anyway? The Western media?
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YesImDeadpool In reply to BrandonScottPilcher [2012-09-11 17:28:57 +0000 UTC]
Canadian media, but even there I mostly hear about scumbags like Gadhafi or Mubarak.
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BrandonScottPilcher In reply to YesImDeadpool [2012-09-11 20:08:49 +0000 UTC]
Those are only the leaders. You are judging entire populations based on leaders who don't even necessarily represent their people's interests.
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YesImDeadpool In reply to BrandonScottPilcher [2012-09-11 22:21:06 +0000 UTC]
They're the ones setting examples. Iran is plotting to destroy the world as we know it.
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BrandonScottPilcher In reply to haodan [2012-09-11 01:57:57 +0000 UTC]
This exactly. Plus the Middle East wasn't always infested with intolerant fanatics. Back in the Middle Ages it actually surpassed parts of Christian Europe in science, technology, and tolerance of different religions. In fact the Middle East's Fertile Crescent was one of the cradles of civilization even before Islam existed.
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SpaceBarnacles In reply to YesImDeadpool [2012-09-11 01:50:50 +0000 UTC]
I am in absolutely no mood to deal with your new atheist, Islamophobic, ass. Get some perspective and realize that your uninformed opinion is not desired here. Please be seated if you think 'most of the Middle East' is fanatical, that's so ignorant I literally can't EVEN. It's like talking to FOX News. Take it elsewhere.
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YesImDeadpool In reply to SpaceBarnacles [2012-09-11 12:54:19 +0000 UTC]
I'm not Atheist, I'm Wiccan.
I've only seen the parts of the Middle East that are full of terrorists and wife beaters.
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BrandonScottPilcher In reply to YesImDeadpool [2012-09-11 01:43:20 +0000 UTC]
Have you ever actually been there?
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YesImDeadpool In reply to BrandonScottPilcher [2012-09-11 12:54:47 +0000 UTC]
I've learned enough about it to know how horrible living there must be.
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SilverVulpine [2012-09-08 01:52:05 +0000 UTC]
This all really sounds engrossing. You've already got a well-textured backdrop for a really compelling story here.
With your adroit verbal skills and fertile imagination really do make this seem like a staggering well of potential.
Oh... Also...
I miss having you on DA.
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haodan In reply to SilverVulpine [2012-09-08 19:11:46 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you, my articulate friend.
And wow, that's a really bright welcome back. xD Good to see you're still active, though! <3
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SilverVulpine In reply to haodan [2012-09-09 01:29:25 +0000 UTC]
You're infinitely welcome, my talented lady.
Of COURSE I'm still active! I've been here 5 years and I ain't going anywhere!
I'll always be right here, if you need me.
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CaribbeanRose9 [2012-09-07 21:45:05 +0000 UTC]
Very nice, I can't wait to read more on her.
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BrandonScottPilcher [2012-09-07 21:17:26 +0000 UTC]
Is this some kind of futuristic setting? Her costume looks modern to me. I admit that I was looking forward to more TSD, but this sounds cool too.
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haodan In reply to BrandonScottPilcher [2012-09-07 21:19:04 +0000 UTC]
It's a mix between futuristic sci-fi and tribal fantasy - my favorites.
And thanks! Always good to hear about some interest.
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BrandonScottPilcher In reply to haodan [2012-09-07 21:19:56 +0000 UTC]
Ooh, futuristic sci-fi meets tribal fantasy. Now that's a really neat mix!
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haodan In reply to BrandonScottPilcher [2012-09-07 21:24:11 +0000 UTC]
I'll try not to disappoint, that's for sure.
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BrandonScottPilcher In reply to haodan [2012-09-07 21:34:21 +0000 UTC]
I like how you're applying issues you've had personal experience with as themes for this project.I'd think it would help you design the characters and setting more realistically.
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haodan In reply to BrandonScottPilcher [2012-09-07 21:37:50 +0000 UTC]
I honestly think it helps to keep my interest in the project. I realized with TSD all the issues were "larger than life" so I couldn't properly flesh out a character's emotions. I think a more personal project will hone my skills for future stories like TSD, at least for now.
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BrandonScottPilcher In reply to haodan [2012-09-07 21:43:46 +0000 UTC]
You've made me wish there was a personal issue I cared deeply about that I could apply to my own projects. Usually I turn to fantasy to escape from the real world's problems, but now that you mention it, a theme that personally resonated with me could help me commit for reasons you stated.
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