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All right folks--this is -not- a finished product. I'm submitting it purely for your critiques and suggestions--I'm trying to add more poses and the like to my repertoire, but I have a -lot- of trouble making things flow and look natural. So please, advise me! And please, if you're going to--don't just point out -what's- wrong, give me suggestions on how to fix it.

Description
All right folks--this is -not- a finished product. I'm submitting it purely for your critiques and suggestions--I'm trying to add more poses and the like to my repertoire, but I have a -lot- of trouble making things flow and look natural. So please, advise me! And please, if you're going to--don't just point out -what's- wrong, give me suggestions on how to fix it.