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Published: 2002-09-05 18:20:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 161; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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II==
Torn
in two
if wrong
I choose
Filled
now full
Please lift
me high
Ready
am I
Indecision gives
another pull
Afraid
to lose
Between me
and you
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Comments: 3
apricotpoet [2002-09-09 09:43:13 +0000 UTC]
I love it... there are more combinations than meets first glance and that is what i like the most, being able to read something new each time i go through it. Excellent work.
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lord-zany [2002-09-05 22:48:09 +0000 UTC]
Then again i think it has a unique flow to it.
I like how when the bold is read it's like a seperate poem, as with the normal, and when read together they still form a unique poem. I like that, that's cool. Nice job.
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tarvalonflame [2002-09-05 21:06:51 +0000 UTC]
ahhhhhh it needs to be expanded !!!!! or maybe you deliberately wanted it short, so that we wonder what you meant... what you will chose....
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