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HongPhi — the balcony
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a balcony in Hawaii. C&C are welcome. Thanks in advance.Related content
Comments: 13
let me critique:
the base of the flower pot on the right looks wrong
the roof is too blurry on the right compared to the top
the fence texture is... hard to believe. and the posts are too perfect/plain white
the green towel and the magazine seem to pop out too much.. maybe it is their lighting or luminosity
overall, i think this is your best work
just wanted to give you an advanced critique
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I like the veranda and everything that's in focus but the focus on the roof in the background and the tree all the way back seems wrong somehow. The focus on the roof is split in two by the pillar, that looks weird. No mean things, just saying what I think, but I assume that this might be one of your older works since the rest looks so different.
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