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Published: 2010-11-21 21:14:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 601; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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Description Ergh, is it improving or going downhill?! I'm really not sure!!
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wolfofdesire [2011-11-03 12:18:36 +0000 UTC]

wow

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Mystic-T [2010-11-22 20:19:43 +0000 UTC]

technically improved, allthough a bit too dark in my opinion.

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howlinghorse [2010-11-22 10:50:07 +0000 UTC]

thanks loads for your helps, its all good stuff and I'm on the case of getting this done today!! finally!

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Rafica [2010-11-22 02:38:55 +0000 UTC]

maybe if you made the barrel more narrow and made the rump less round? i'd also add more of a point to the left shoulder
the colors are wonderful though

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Tala-Twilight [2010-11-21 21:44:25 +0000 UTC]

I still like it! It looks like you've tightened up the neck and hind nicely, but lost a bit of that spirited naturalness you had in the ribs and shoulder. I'm not sure how to recapture that, other than go back to boldly blocking in the shadows and highlights, then sweeping around from there.

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lazybrownhorse [2010-11-21 21:32:50 +0000 UTC]

I see improvement. One suggestion, I think it would look better if you could blend the transition between the red and black more.

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runninghoofbeats [2010-11-21 21:16:39 +0000 UTC]

Improved, although, I think it might look better if you extended the red coloring out farther. It still looks amazing though, I love how you added some pink highlights!

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