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Published: 2012-07-04 01:26:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 247; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 1
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I am afraid of sincerity,a child lost in endless dark.
fluttering lids,
a promise of yesterday's dream
lingers without thought
world,
you leave an indifference
upon the wake
of every dawn,
while remnants--voiceless fire
sing of a burning yet to be profound.
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"I am afraid of sincerity,
a child lost in endless dark."I love the opening stanza. I was hooked before the end of the sentence. This is more than a prayer, it's a dialogue between you and your past, your future and god. It reminds me of how moses would argue with god during their time of exile in the desert.
This may sound strange coming from me, but I am also afraid and always wary of sincerity, even when I've found it and possess it. I can't believe it will last, I'm not afraid of being hurt, but I'm scared of being alone.
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This, my dear Julia, is one of your finest pieces.
Consider me blown away.
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