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Published: 2011-09-19 16:03:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 194; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 1
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Description eyes become a form of liquidation,
mourning for a fact no longer
credible

strewn across mother nature's feet
swarming tongues grasp in consumable
passion, in coming summer wind;
sticky, honeyed breaths

leaves pepper forsaken soil,
ruins imprisioned in
winter's weeping heart
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Comments: 5

BeyondJen [2011-10-05 07:16:49 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful. Gosh, such imagery in every damn line!
And the title...it seems so fitting for such a deep piece. Well done, m'dear.

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breathingglassstars [2011-09-30 22:41:57 +0000 UTC]

"winter's weeping heart"
what a perfect picture, i think it would be blue
you are lovely and so is this

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archelyxs [2011-09-23 19:20:47 +0000 UTC]

Oh these images, very lovely

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DamagedHomewrecker [2011-09-19 23:17:07 +0000 UTC]

this is lovely. the second stanza is my favorite and the title is just perfect for this.

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FuzzyHoser [2011-09-19 17:05:06 +0000 UTC]

Umm...you hope you did it justice?! Oh, dear.. I'm pretty much amazed you came up with something so pretty and with as much depth with such words.

Fantastic, this is.

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